~ Universes

Universes, Poetry, E.L. Eli, Elisa Laura, Red, Magnetic fields, Science, Love, Light, Freedom, Rest, Peace, Trust, Self trust...

~ Universes

 

 

Like the free flight

Of wings unchained

I spread them among

My never ending

Glancing universe,

To say hi to every cloud

Upon my galactic visit,

To wave to every dusty sparkle

To kiss each unworthy matter

In the platonic nothingness

Into my veil of realm

I dream your scent

Your perfume of freedom

Your light beyond

Astrologic blurry skies

The purity of yourself awareness

And sparkles of my fairest

I sing with you some universes

For I am not sleepy ever

I shall be awake and embrace

The light of eternity

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

For the music knowers,
Saltillo.... ♥♫

Reviews

[Distant horizons]

This feels like freedom in knowing no matter what is going on in life, you are always aware of being a far bigger part, in a far bigger unseen picture. Felt, sensed andsimply acknowledged as fact. Sometimes we do not need proof to know such things. Beautifully crafted Elisa

You understand it dear friend... :) makes my day! hug, and (x) till soon ok? :)

[Distant horizons]

(x)

[Drifter]

This is a stirring piece. Coupled with the music playing in the background, it's something... powerful. Well done!

Thank you Drifter, nice to have you around....

[Drifter]

You're welcome.

:)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"The purity of yourself awareness

And sparkles of my fairest

I sing with you some universes

For I am not sleepy ever

I shall be awake and embrace

The light of eternity"

~I cannot express to you how much this lifts my heart. Your light is the Purity of the Truth Sis! I am only humbled by the peaceful grace this write exudes. Your embrace is truly felt in this exquisite piece...Beautifully written Eli!~xoxo~ There is Perfection in your universe!

Many thank yous beautiful woman, so there is in yours xxxx :)

[Revery]

I love the spirit of this write. It's wonderful Elisa. It takes the reader into a thoughtful good place and makes us contemplate are being in a larger picture.

Thank you so much my friend, I love to be connected sometimes with richer spaces and worlds, I'm glad that you enjoyed my write :) have a nice day xoxo

[Shandra Sun]

When I have the privilege to experience such a beauty as you are able to create with words...I feel humble and touched, till the deepest of my being. Because...than I know we are never alone.
I hope you can feel the sweet gratitude flying back to you, for sharing this piece of Light with us.
The space from where you writte is a holy one. Many blessings dear friend.

Thank you my friend, x

[Ed Fagan]

If anyone were to take such a flight I could see it being you. It would be an magical sight I am sure. I willing to bet one might even regain a bit of innocence. Mystical in nature I love it.

Thank you dear friend for flying a bit with me :) all innocent ofc. That's a nice view you gave me among my words ...

[Ed Fagan]

... as you once told me, your words created the review. :)