~ Universes

Universes, Poetry, E.L. Eli, Elisa Laura, Red, Magnetic fields, Science, Love, Light, Freedom, Rest, Peace, Trust, Self trust...

~ Universes

 

 

Like the free flight

Of wings unchained

I spread them among

My never ending

Glancing universe,

To say hi to every cloud

Upon my galactic visit,

To wave to every dusty sparkle

To kiss each unworthy matter

In the platonic nothingness

Into my veil of realm

I dream your scent

Your perfume of freedom

Your light beyond

Astrologic blurry skies

The purity of yourself awareness

And sparkles of my fairest

I sing with you some universes

For I am not sleepy ever

I shall be awake and embrace

The light of eternity

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

For the music knowers,
Saltillo.... ♥♫

Reviews

[Distant horizons]

This feels like freedom in knowing no matter what is going on in life, you are always aware of being a far bigger part, in a far bigger unseen picture. Felt, sensed andsimply acknowledged as fact. Sometimes we do not need proof to know such things. Beautifully crafted Elisa

You understand it dear friend... :) makes my day! hug, and (x) till soon ok? :)

[Distant horizons]

(x)

[S]

the cosmos so beautifully defined in your poem....its really great...

[h d e rushin]

Just fantastic.!

You're going to drag me to to the heavens sooner or later.
Thanks for sharing,
dana

[Ken Simm.]

When romance goes beyond. And this one does. Superb lyrical piece.

Thank you so much dear poet

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the possibilites of love and life are endless, we just have to feel them...love the way you write...the words just pour forth...they attack our spirit.

this is a beautiful piece...one suggestion though.."your self-awareness"

but , wow!

"i dream your scent/ your perfume of freedom"

what a great line.

jacob

You felt the Dutch freedom, a thing what is rarely to understand by neighbors..... Glad you did felt it..........

[Starfruitanimal]

this did make me emotional, i enjoyed it. to feel a dream that is sometimes lingering behind you but you know it is possible.. the feeling of peace, maybe . freedom, a big one. everyone should deserve to be free. from themselves and others, thank you again

Beautiful words dear soulsis, yes you feel it so profound.... you're talented in any way xoxo

[Pax]

I read this a couple of times now and the meaning changes everytime in my mind... the magical or enchanting feel to it is there like the vast universe... its beyond science and magic... its the universal love... without bounderies as it fly free in freedoms ways...

wonderful my dear friend!!!

I can catch your thoughts on that [point] as I did it myself the same, that's the beauty of re reading. I guess... on the time I wrote it it had a different meaning as I am reflecting it already now. But the main subject is love you felt it. Yes. Aw you're so good! :) thank you for all you do, and each and every review dearest! xxxx

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I totally feel this poem! amazing and beautiful, it makes me happy and even full of energy!
I loved the expression 'perfume of freedom" ! it has unique smell, so never can be mistaken :) we all need to embracy the eternity and feel finally in the heart of the nature and love! brilliant poem, sweet eli!
No♥r

So happy you are around sweetest friend x

[Tree]

To wander among the stars as if the whole universe were a playground, I embrace your imagery. Are you talking to the stars? A loved one? the creator, or yourself? A journey of dreams and stars, thank you for the vision

It all could be brother... really. Great philosophical thoughts you come up with... but I tell you honestly, it's pure zen meditation xx

[Tree]

That is how I imagined it, thank you sis

I knew you would... :) x