~ Kuekuatsu

~ Poetry, Elisa Laura, Connection, Visions Moonchild

~ Kuekuatsu

 

 

Times will fly in Romantic skies

He loved her deeply, and out of all pain

He whispered her love so brilliant insane

Under the light her pale skin moved

Out of her body, to renewal

And by the sunny sky when she slept

His spirit was connected to her

In no other way could describe

She blew him strength, and

Unnoticed discrete love in length

But he only could burn, it with his light

When he left the spirit world,

And fell in love with a living

He never forgot what her taste

Had given him into his emptiness 

And his unforgivable lack

She moved in his core by each step

And he could love anew in freedom

By her light twinkling his heart

Moving forward on his being

Where she was not touchable

Anymore, but inner deeply felt

And reaching beyond his

Matter, where she lived

In his feeling, and air he took

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Matt Sayer]

The love beyond, above and shining down, carried by the caressing wind from the realm of soft spirits, alive in the heart of an ether given form to find love in the physical. Love is not matter, not atoms, not a corporeal possession or entity to be bound to this world, but a force that flirts with our existence from a paradise of purity and pleasure unseen by our eyes. Love this poem :)

OMG who would ever think, someone would came by, to this oldie, but a very meaningful one... I knew you would feel this one, xx and embrace it. Thank you so much my dear friend... your words, I treasure, deep in my little heart. :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

The Romance in this touches to the core... whispers of an eternal love. This is written eloquently dear Poetess!...You have once again weaved your magic to enchant me!

"She moved in his core by each step

And he could love anew in freedom

By her light twinkling his heart

Moving forward on his being

Where she was not touchable"~ Superb!...such an unconditional love this is!

Thank you lovely woman! your heart always shines... xxx

[Tree]

"She blew him strength" .... It is what every man desires, to be lifted by the one who loves him so that He may reach his potential; then turn around and reciprocate... I always find peace, love and wisdom, on your page. Thank you Ellie

Thank you dear one. For seeing that, and feeling honesty. I am always honest.... love to you!

[Corset]

He howls at the trickery, he howls at the injustice, he howls as he will never touch her again, all the wild roses in the world can never bring him back again, once he left the spirit world he can never return (to her), such a heart breaking story, so unfair is life at times. Beautiful Ellie, it's just beautiful what you have done with it. :)

Thank you lovely so sweet of you... xo

P.s. maybe she howls at all injustice too?
Some frozen light, could influence...
Always.... but it still remains poetry. Thank god.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Wow. You've wrapped us up in so many emotions.
This is a true gem. It grasps the heart and forces
the reader to feel. I enjoyed being out of control for just a moment.

Thank you for your being out of control... :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Hey, I dont just trust anybody with my being out of control!!! :)

LOL, glad I could take you with my surreal thoughts, friend... as long as you believe in YOU.... only YOU.

[Rene Velez]

Lovely thoughts here, sweet and endearing piece E.L.

Oh thank you... dear one xo

[Pax]

He loved her deeply, and out of all pain
He whispered her love so brilliant insane
~ wow a powerful imagery i view upon... a profound love out of paint...

this work is really profound in its freedom of thoughts... something about spiritual freedom and letting go... but the connection is still there in your soulful depths of your heart... wonderful work my friend.

Hey sweetheart, I was late home... just got buzzed on my HTC and a new day starts, how do I love to wake with your thoughts :) thank you so much.... If a heart had her whole life true love, it's woven in her writes.
Thank you my friend. Love to Saudi, always with you! xo

[Pax]

hugs... have a great day ahead of you my friend... and your always welcome...

[Sugar Plum ♥]

lovely sweet and beautiful poem, dear eli! it`s so deep feeling of love, connection with nature, spirit and mind...my favorite verses are :
She moved in his core by each step
And he could love anew in freedom
no♥r

Love you.... exactly, love is letting free, and go.... you and me understand this perfectly xxx better times shall come x

[Sugar Plum ♥]

yes...miss u dearest sister!

I miss you too most precious! xo