~ To My Strongest

~ E.L. Elisa Laura, Poetry,

~ To My Strongest

 

 

When by the purest me, I am

Bathing the darkness away

Where nothing but knowledge rests

Where purity speaks through

And where facts sweet hope

I am still breathing, on this planet

Where you breath too…

Your wish is to torture,

To slaughter me, even

To hang me on the biggest tree

But hey, “listen”

I’m not made for thee

Too free, too me, I am

You ne’er handle me,

Like his hands are velveteen

His words a living dream

When I’ll die, it will be simply;

With a bullet, and a smile

No drama, or lament

O’er me just perfect love

And stylish we’ll vent

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Your words are remarkable!...There is always an inspirational message weaved into your work. This is powerful in my minds eye... touching the core of Strength, to rise above darkness! I truly enjoyed reading this elegant write! The light shines within the darkness.~xo~:)

Thank you for feeling me without speaking x

[Deuces]

Interesting. Almost a farewell to possessiveness and restraint. Defining yourself and telling the world that you will live and die by your own means, not by anyone else's. A true stand you take in your words. They reveal power and self love. Awesome.

Thank you for your thoughts, dear friend, your visions, and perceptions are most welcome here... :) glad you enjoyed this.

[Constance L. Hartwell]

I look forward to your work because it is so inspirational. Once again you've managed to beautifully convey a language of the soul. Excellent job!

Thank you so much my friend... I will be back soon!

[Corset]

under the darkest basket is our Ellie candle shining brightly to light the way. Thankful for you today dear one, I don't know if fabulous Dutchies celebrate the US traditional holiday of being Thankful, but you do that every day without reason or cause, and for this, I am thankful :)

I do.... in silence, and I wish everyone a great day full of love, turkey family, and all the things it will take.... :) I'm thankful sober, to those who understand. ♥

[#33]

Like his hands are velveteen

His words a living dream

I would love to be your inspiration. ;)

Thank you :)

[sharonlee]

This is very strong and emotive... be true to you. x

Thank you rich soul xx

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

I am proud and impressed with your darker stuff. This poem has dark magic to it, which I really enjoy. It has powerful imagery that will haunt me even after I'd read it.

Thank you dear :)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

i loved the beginning, even all sounds little dark...nothoing can be simple as we wish! we are "humans" to be together..but why we are not? no darkness anymore :)
no♥r

Sometimes, to really heal, you must go to the bottom, dear sister, to see light again, and I saw light... thank you so much for your lovely review! xxx till very soon ;) (and you're always welcome here) just call me, you have my number!

[h d e rushin]

Oh my, EL those last three lines were just magic....I needed this today. Thank you, dana

Thank you sweetest! x

[lost girl]

I dreamed the image from this video this morning!!!!! I thought it was the end of the world. I thought it was destruction ...but alas it was ...a poet ...with her strength and words....

Sometimes, death visions, are coming close.... thank you