I'm sorry for your loss, but I am glad that you have come back (at least further) out of the moonlight. Though you undoubtedly learned some truths out there in the darkness. I felt a stillness and cold come over my heart reading this. It really hit me hard when you said that you couldn't see the silver lining. Really really fantastic this one, and I am glad that we have some similarities in our music. I hope that things have gotten better from this low point!
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11 Years Ago
Thank you T. for this amazing review, (didn't expect it) the better it salutes me in my early mornin.. read moreThank you T. for this amazing review, (didn't expect it) the better it salutes me in my early morning.... :) You're really kind, things have gone way better, through the last year.... at least, like I told you, I don't want to see myself there ;) (((HUGS)))
Very Romantic, (which is my favorite poetic genre). It reminds me of a poem "Art though pale for weariness." I love the relationship between moon and ocean and undersea tides. Excellent poem Elisa.
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Thank you very much. I will check out that poem. Great you give me something to read. I'm glad you e.. read moreThank you very much. I will check out that poem. Great you give me something to read. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this... thanks
Just as you are, your work carries a gentle grace!
I found this be profoundly moving, as this expression flowed through my heart.
I hold you in my spirits care in meditation as you process this sorrow.
Sending my Love to You {Eli} ~ xx
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11 Years Ago
Thank you dearest Judi, hope all is well with you xx till we meet again ♥
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Every meeting is "sweeter" dear Elise. Even in time of sorrow {you} inspire!
~ Gentle hugs ~
"I will be eclipsed forever soon
As I’ve spoken my heart
I can’t go on shining
While I’m inner dying" - I know a feeling such as this, although I do not know the circumstances that brought you to pen it. There is a lonely place I know, full of hurt and darkness...
"The time for me has come
I will be moving on" - sometimes from need, or for survival, or for growth...the moving on is seldom simple, or easy no matter the impetus.
The pain in this is intense, yet purely penned. Your work is from the heart, and resonates.
Thank you lovely, you will find out when you've read, "No more Roots" A lot of mixed feelings escape.. read moreThank you lovely, you will find out when you've read, "No more Roots" A lot of mixed feelings escaped me, entered me anew... escaped, and so on and forth... I'm dealing with this, after my loss, as I never like to say a "goodbye" to anyone.... thank you so much for your love, and encouring words, they mean a lot to me.... xxxx I will be back for you, after I'm stronger....
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I will read on...take time to nurture yourself...your strength is evident, but deep pain needs atten.. read moreI will read on...take time to nurture yourself...your strength is evident, but deep pain needs attention.
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♥ Your heart is warm, I do love your words, thank you.... x
It takes a great soul to embrace all seasons of Life. You are one of those, dear one. You know it and you can express it beautifully.
I'm so grateful I may share this virtual space with you.
Be well. I know you will.
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11 Years Ago
You're a true treasure. We breathing the same air... Thank you for your visions.
sad and beautiful feeling...melancholy of the nature is inside of us and opposite, we are like little galaxies, everything has resonanse above our beings..so gentle and sad piece!
xx No♥r ~
I LOVE THIS PEICE!!!!!! the music and the poem its my favourite one to play!!!
and about the poem: it's beautiful, from start to end, it flows nicely, and i loved how it ends well donw!