I'm sorry for your loss, but I am glad that you have come back (at least further) out of the moonlight. Though you undoubtedly learned some truths out there in the darkness. I felt a stillness and cold come over my heart reading this. It really hit me hard when you said that you couldn't see the silver lining. Really really fantastic this one, and I am glad that we have some similarities in our music. I hope that things have gotten better from this low point!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you T. for this amazing review, (didn't expect it) the better it salutes me in my early mornin.. read moreThank you T. for this amazing review, (didn't expect it) the better it salutes me in my early morning.... :) You're really kind, things have gone way better, through the last year.... at least, like I told you, I don't want to see myself there ;) (((HUGS)))
Thank you my dear, it was written out of emotion, when my grandfather died, in 2012. Thank you so mu.. read moreThank you my dear, it was written out of emotion, when my grandfather died, in 2012. Thank you so much for your sweet words xo
10 Years Ago
This is one of my all time favorite classical songs..You are welcome dear Elisa.
Another beautiful poem and I loved the last line, "i will be moving on." Many of us believe we are strong but falling in love make us weak, specially if it's more kind a one sided. This poem will connect with many good write as always.
Thank you for your beautiful interpretation... my friend. Your thoughts, and effort are valued by me.. read moreThank you for your beautiful interpretation... my friend. Your thoughts, and effort are valued by me :)
10 Years Ago
You're always welcome my dear.
10 Years Ago
Thank you, I shall play this soon again, now sad memories came back to me... and with music, we cele.. read moreThank you, I shall play this soon again, now sad memories came back to me... and with music, we celebrate.
I'm sorry for your loss, but I am glad that you have come back (at least further) out of the moonlight. Though you undoubtedly learned some truths out there in the darkness. I felt a stillness and cold come over my heart reading this. It really hit me hard when you said that you couldn't see the silver lining. Really really fantastic this one, and I am glad that we have some similarities in our music. I hope that things have gotten better from this low point!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you T. for this amazing review, (didn't expect it) the better it salutes me in my early mornin.. read moreThank you T. for this amazing review, (didn't expect it) the better it salutes me in my early morning.... :) You're really kind, things have gone way better, through the last year.... at least, like I told you, I don't want to see myself there ;) (((HUGS)))
I feel this one with every fiber of my being...I never had the chance to say good bye to my sister, nor would I have wanted to.
'I will be eclipsed forever soon
As I’ve spoken my heart
I can’t go on shining
While I’m inner dying'
You own my tears tonight lovely lady.
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11 Years Ago
Let them flow freely here on Eli's place... you're embraced with my arms! X sister.... be back soon .. read moreLet them flow freely here on Eli's place... you're embraced with my arms! X sister.... be back soon more for you forgive my absence in the meantime... :'(
Bittersweet and sad. Flowed a bit like an old blues song in spots. Like in the secand and third stanza. Just beautiful...
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much.... BR, :) good to see you again, I'm slow, I know... will come back for your awes.. read moreThank you so much.... BR, :) good to see you again, I'm slow, I know... will come back for your awesome poems... x
Sometimes goodbye is a second chanbe. One of my favourite poetries soo far.. Till then live out loud.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you again sweet Kenilo, have some patience with me, too many good poets on here to review, to .. read moreThank you again sweet Kenilo, have some patience with me, too many good poets on here to review, to less time... I shall visit your "moon poems" ;)
Its ok, thanks. But you are always welcome. I love poetry as poetry. And keep on writing more. Be yo.. read moreIts ok, thanks. But you are always welcome. I love poetry as poetry. And keep on writing more. Be yourself and live out loud.
Losing the warmth of another's light as it leaves the chambers of one's heart, thus leaving it to slowly freeze. Quite an interesting depiction you casted, in moonlight. But, that slow freeze can be warded off with the occurrence of another light taking place and filling the void. Question is, would you be willing to open the doors once more? Many ponder, and many return to square one on a lower note. It is almost like gambling, with your soul as the chips and happiness as the jackpot. Favoriting this.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you my dear friend for this wonderful review, firstly, secondly, this was written for someone .. read moreThank you my dear friend for this wonderful review, firstly, secondly, this was written for someone who passed away, at the 14th of November last year, a family member of me. I couldn't say goodbye to him, as I never say goodbye's though, but it's double loaded... as you can understand, it comforts, and hurts, the hurt, even more. To answer your question: "My doors are always open" I'm a Dutch, :) everyone as long they do no hurt, is welcome. I though like you huse the "gambling" part, I did spoke to someone of some failiors lately in a gambling way. :) Thank you my clever friend, for all, and favoriting this, you're a treasure. - Elisa
oops, I mistook the poem to be about love lost. Hmmm, I guess that just means that the poem is tha.. read moreoops, I mistook the poem to be about love lost. Hmmm, I guess that just means that the poem is that much better since it is ambiguous. Very nice. You are a bigger treasure. :D
11 Years Ago
Sorry for your loss
11 Years Ago
No worries, you couldn't know... perceptions, and assumptions are born in self-experiences, so nothi.. read moreNo worries, you couldn't know... perceptions, and assumptions are born in self-experiences, so nothing to blame on you, I love your honesty, your way of thinking, and all here is possible, feel welcome in my world, to dare, and to talk about anything openly. Thanks a lot my friend. :)