~ Walk with me

E.L. Elisa, Spirituality, Being.

~ Walk with me

 

Close your eyes, and give

Yourself over

To my warm hands

I always have in winter

Time

To hold

Give yourself a rest

In pure space of nothing

In fresh blue air

Where nothing rests

But to be

As two souls flying

Together hand in hand

Let me whisper you

Silently what love means

And how to reach it

Elusiveness dwells

In our existence

Even as being equal

With thoughts

In distance without

Speaking

Hold my hand, and you

Will feel, I’m always

By your side

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you x

Reviews

[Chris]

"Lemon Drops..."

Falling tears have a sound -
when you hear it inside
the echo and its sharpness
is deafening and shakes your core...
when you feel them from outside
its as if they'll never stop...
and when you're alone
they fall and fall and fall.

Chris

Acid truth sir. Thank you xx

[Chris]

not acid lil one...just from the heart...

"Blessed Be..."
Chris

Aight... :) xoxo

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to walk with another. Always strength in numbers. Good to have someone willing to pick you up when you fall. A beautiful and positive poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Thank you so much sweet friend :)

[oxo]

i can relate to this... let me whisper you... i really felt it. great write, and the song, i love it. two thumbs up!!!

Thank you dear one, It means a much to me. This write was and is sincere.
I wrote it out of my heart. So glad you felt it xxx

[oxo]

no wonder why i felt it. :) keep it up:)

I will be here for you dear, after my mourning time with my grandpaps. I won't forget you, you're a blessing.

[oxo]

that's sad, but it will pass. i lost someone dear to me too, my father, 10 yrs ago. but i can assure you, things will get better. just don't hang on sadness for a long time. don't forget to smile.:)

Honestly dear soul that's worser than anything. You're so strong, That's why I'm connected more as ever now with my mom, it was her father.
I'm stronger than her. I blow her strenght now, as I want to be here for those who need it too. Things will be good, I trust on that, and even better after your strong words. We must smile precious! we love to smile as Asians... it's in our nature. xxxx you're special

[oxo]

i'm glad. really glad. :) :)

[Magdelena]

Oh this was sweet... Your words seeped right through me. And your music, perfection, it matched your words to a tee..

Mags xx

Oh thank you Magdelena for your visit, and words, Love to you xx

[Magdelena]

You are very welcome sweets.. I adore your work. Love to you also. xx

I will be around more for your work of art, just I am now in a bad period, of mourning, :( grandpaps died, and all the admin that it cost before you can mourn, as we do as Indo's in 40 days, after... thank you dearest, xo will be back soon for you!

[Magdelena]

Oh I am so sorry Love.. I feel your pain.. Lost my husband over a year ago, so my deepest sympathy to you and yours. I will see you soon...
Much love xx

[Kaylor Mason]

You have my sympathies and respect, ladies. I am sorry for both of your respective losses

Oh love, aw, that is the most worst thing one can go trough... I'm crying for you now.... really. I know what lost means...... believ me.
We are connected in that. Much love Mag, you're a real strong soul, and dear Kyler, thank you for passing by again, my friend. You're so Koan! x

[Magdelena]

Love to you both.. I am so very glad to have met you both tonight. A deep connection has come forth and a strong bond..
Till later
xx

[Pax]

mesmerizing as touching heartfelt write... I can see the flight of two souls in a journey of something so peaceful...
amazing write my friend...

Thank you dearest x

[Pax]

your welcome...hope your doing well my friend..

xx you know me ;)

[DrD]

I always like how you take abstractions and mold them into lovely thouhts with eloquent expression. This is no exception and it was a meaningful and moving read.

Thank you so much, DrD, always nice to see a good poet as yourself by...

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

This is an extremely touching poem you have here. You'd written this so beautifully that I was almost holding hands with you. You're such an amazing and gifted poet. No how many times I'd said that, it's still very true. Hope you doing well :)

Thank you dear friend, you are one of a few who felt my warm hands. X

[lost girl]

How well you have said your peace in goodbye! I am sure he will always know out there in the blue of it all what an amazing soul you have!He will remember you always as a twinkle.(on another note) I wonder when connections leave us in form or spirit if they become the tender's of our soul gardens. I wonder if they sing hymns to the rocks that lie there softening their core so they can be harvested back into the soil of who we will become. (just ramblings of a crazy ole soul still... becoming) This piece is very beautiful!

Thank you for your thought provoking review... I will explain you one day what I meant by this poem...

[Larry Dyson]

ty this is wonderful and endearing.Laury

Thank you kind sir ...

[FJ Davis]

Who would not want to walk with you?
Lovely soul-to-soul communication.
You are truly special, Elisa.

Thank you dear friend ...

[Tree]

So full of love, Ellie. If everyone had what you describe, this world would be less/ angry. And it is not a dream, what you've written about it exists. Thank you for sharing this

One love bro xo ♥ thank you!