~ Idyllic

~ E.L. Poetry, Green.

 

~ Idyllic

 

There will be another Moon

More serene and brighten

Another Sun whereon I shall dance

Some stars to behold tighter

And some lakes where I don’t drown

There will be forests which lead me

And Mountains to climb upon

There will be shining gardens

And larger fields to run

There will be emerald visions

For me to hold on

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you for visiting! xx

Reviews

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Dear Elisa, This is a wonderful piece of art that you have crafted here. I love the vivid imagery and glossy sensory details which you have bestowed your audience with. I also love that sense of connection that you have created with nature, and how it resembles your own personal escape. My favorite stanza was "There will be shining gardens, And larger fields to run, There will be emerald visions ,For me to hold on". Great Job--as usual-- Elisa. very handsome write indeed.
Your pal from New Jersey lol,
Cord

You make me smile New Jersey :) thanks a lot handsome one! xo

[FJ Davis]

Lovely photo; lovely words.
A profoundly inspiring dream of hoped-for renewal!

Thank you so much Frank...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

well, your pal from NY agrees with your pal from NJ...what a brilliant piece of writing.


and to offer my take...i felt the Garden of Eden here....i saw recreation...a revisiting of the Garden...

starting over when everything was unblemished, untarnished and we could all run naked and not be ashamed...somthing much brighter, and worth holding on to.

jacob

Thank you very much J.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

The Green Goddess in you speaks of peace, hope, faith, and positivity for the future of a better place.
This is breathtaking!! You inspire me, sweet poetess... you always do. You never cease to amaze me. Superb write! I love this. :)

Thank you so much, your the same inspiration for me Hon xxx

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I loved reading it... lovely Goddess of poetry. :)
P.S. The imagery is beautiful....love the green, my favorite color! ~xo~

Thank you so much, well obviously mine too in combination with blue, mint, turquoise, sea blue sea green, navy blue etc... So glad you enjoyed it :) -xx

[Eve]

The green of hope shines eternal :) I love this one too! You never miss the mark, always moved into a smile, near you and your words! oxoxox

Thank you so dearly. Your thoughts do me good... x