~ Idyllic

~ E.L. Poetry, Green.

 

~ Idyllic

 

There will be another Moon

More serene and brighten

Another Sun whereon I shall dance

Some stars to behold tighter

And some lakes where I don’t drown

There will be forests which lead me

And Mountains to climb upon

There will be shining gardens

And larger fields to run

There will be emerald visions

For me to hold on

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you for visiting! xx

Reviews

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Dear Elisa, This is a wonderful piece of art that you have crafted here. I love the vivid imagery and glossy sensory details which you have bestowed your audience with. I also love that sense of connection that you have created with nature, and how it resembles your own personal escape. My favorite stanza was "There will be shining gardens, And larger fields to run, There will be emerald visions ,For me to hold on". Great Job--as usual-- Elisa. very handsome write indeed.
Your pal from New Jersey lol,
Cord

You make me smile New Jersey :) thanks a lot handsome one! xo

[Androglossia]

Looking at the bright side of life doesn't hurt the eyes, so let us keep looking at the brighter part:) Let us avert our gaze towards positive images and thinking such as the sweet content of a black candy and beautiful inner qualities of an angry face. This is such a refreshing write. The color adds to the quality and the poem can be taken in so many different interpretations.

Thank you dearly love, I feel honored by your words, yes... this was an older one, when I went through a immense terrible periode. I always am a very positive person, nobody can kick me down, and I love that in you too! :) you're such a strong woman. Thank you for your insights, and lovely words, truly appreciated... same wavelength ~ xx

[Androglossia]

I was trying to change the color of my comment to green:) To my amazement, HTML doesn't work anymore! Anyway, you're very welcome, love.

Aw that is pity.... it doesn't work anymore, you're such a colorful creature, love it... :) makes me smile! Green is my favorite colour... ;D

[Androglossia]

Green is abundance:)

Yes, it is a natural color, a color so abundance yes.... rich... :) x

[Jack...]

Beautiful vistas for a beautiful woman. This was like a painting, so soft were the brush strokes, so delicate were the lines, and all of it framed in beauty.

Thank you so much Jack :)

[Pax]

a short poem that brings so much meaning...
so much story that brings...
a shining tale of vission of another enchanting world for new beginning...

An amazing write... indeed!!!

:) so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you my friend always so nice to have you around!

[Pax]

as always your welcome...i always enjoyed your works....

So I do yours, you're such a talented philosopher/writer/painter/drawer/friend :D

[Pax]

:D ~ makes me smile until it reach my eye...lol... thanks...same to you...

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Very, very, very imagery. I can't think of other ways to express my words, other than you just shook me like ragdoll that spilled every word out of my mouth. I'm telling you, your poems are just make me speechless.

Thank you sweet friend, I'll be back for you soon... x

[Tree]

An enchanting write. When I read you I can always count on being transported
to a magical place; lands of fairy tales, and dreams. Thank you for the journey
Eli.

Thank you Diego, wonderful words :)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

this poem-vision if one of the most beautiful i read! it shows the pure harmony with the nature, desire of travelling souls for new places, all elements, all cores, the world surrounding us is so
rich and we can`t even touch little from it in this life...The mediation -vision is as healing for our soul. Green :)
no♥r ~

Nia, darling, you're a gift from God. You have the richest soul of the cafe. GBU

[Sugar Plum ♥]

oh so lovely words from u, dearest eli! :)

[Ruth]

And that would be the perfect reality, shows there is strength to be found in our wanderings of the imagination, this is beautiful ♥

Thank you beautiful woman, much love from over seas. :) so happy with you ♥

[Ruth]

Much love darling ♥

[Belle]

There will be shining gardens
And larger fields to run
There will be emerald visions
For me to hold on
Nature is very inhuman but more than human is capable of giving love--
giving us larger fields to run, a horizon that endlessly giving us positive
visions.
Dearest Eli this is a perfect vocal image of the connection between
human and nature. I love how you weaved your words here.

Thank you so much sweet sis Belle, I love your honest heart, and your intellect. Always a pleasure to get real feedback of a one, who feels me. XXX

[emmajoy]

' There will be shining gardens ~~ And larger fields to run ' and your music ripples along.

.. rebirth, reincarnation, renaissance - a fresh start .. Nature has its way with spirit and body, the two are absolutely entwined and you have the key to the ultimate secret of what is YOU. Love it, love it to pieces..

Thank you Emma, dearest. Your words make me happy, and indeed move to a fresh start, after a lot of bad luck... be blessed lovely one! x

[emmajoy]

Sending you thoughts of lucky black cats, four leafed clover, horseshoes and prayers galore.

[Shandra Sun]

There is such a serenity in the way you express your vision from te unfolded possibilities. And a calm determination at the same time.
I feel these words as mine. Tears fill my eyes. From gratefulness. Yes, there will be always new beginings. New horizons, unknown corners, beter surprises. We hoop...

Thank you so much Shandra... your words and mine are connected! xo