~ Our Song

~ E.L. Poetry, Music, Love Chords

 

~ Our Song

 

 

A life of wisdom

Chords

Darker than light

And better than

Sound

Higher than

The sound barrier

Sung to love

Tucked

Within the spirit

Of our creative brain

The music is heard

Between two souls

Actually

Stronger than ever

In silent pleasure

Of our song

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

:) This write is for someone very special, someone from nearby the miles....
And not from USA.

Thank you x

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

And it must be a beautiful song indeed...a lovely poem that invoke so much with simplest of expression from your soul...lovely write my dear friend.

Thank you my friend, for diggin' the library lol ;) xx

[Everett DeValle]

You are very welcome, Dearest One. :)

So sweet of you to read this older piece :) happy morning from Dutch-land lol

[Everett DeValle]

Oh Shoosh, I Love reading you, Elisa. :)

Awww, you're too sweet for me Ev :)) I feel honored really (blush) I can't handle compliments lol :P

[Everett DeValle]

Well, in that case, You are F**ken Sexy. :)-

Hmmm.... well I don't think I am. I'm just normal dear friend...

[Everett DeValle]

That's what I find So Sexy. ;)

He he... I can't beat that can I? x

[Everett DeValle]

Je T'Adore, Elisa. :)

Aw, Merci mon ami.... Je t'adore aussi :)

[Everett DeValle]

Je ve en prie, Elisa...Tu es dans toutes mes pensees...Tu es pour moi la plus belle. :)

You make me shy Ev.... ;) with these words :))) need to runnaway lol ;)

[Everett DeValle]

Merci bien, Elisa! :)

I shall come back soon, read/review more.... must go in a while now... sniff, take much care, and thanks for all sweet friend (one love)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

oh, very special and collecting all delicate moments of sharing piece of music!
great expression of friendship and delight, I like the contast, whcih you make by the sound of song and "silenced pleasure"..incredible!
no♥r ~

I love you picked that out, you know me ;) you're a gem!

[Pax]

your heart is always in tune my friend...
your music in life is simply beautiful...
this particular note brings pleasure to us your friends....
Great work...

Thanks my sweet Buddy :)

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Just the right tune :) Your words are like music, just seem to flow brilliantly. Beautiful.

Thank you Gregster :) I'm grateful to have you around.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Your heartsong sings in this beautiful write! Every song has a life of its own.... expressing what the heart feels. Emotion (pain or happiness, love) can be felt in every note. Lovely!

Thank you so much :)

[FJ Davis]

That inner melody that communicates more than could ever be spoken.
Meaningful mutual vibrations preparing two lovers for some sweet duet jammin'.
Lovely, E. L.!

And how do I love to Jam! :) ♫ thanks dear poet, Frank! *smile*

[jacob erin-cilberto]

really like the music of this...and to be the subject of this piece would be flattering...he's got to love it...harmony.
it's like some great collaboration on a poem...love is like that when it works...

the words and theme just flow.

jacob

You have a keen eye sir Jacob, it's always a pleasure to read your words. :)

[Sheila Kline]

It is in the silent pleasure of song that lovers discover the depth of their devotion, and hear the loudest of "I love you's"!! This music is harmony of their souls.
Beautiful........as always my friend!

You're a soul sis, and musician, if you ask me :) thank you dearly!