~ Perfumed

~ Lost in Oblivion

~ Perfumed

 

Bath o Bath full of etheric bliss

Drown me to life O’ Please!

Breathe me back my lost perfume

As bygone days will come

Let me dream into your petals

Whisper me underwater love

Bath o Bath of my pink rejuvenation

Wash off my green old nature

Bubble me to newer streams

Of youth where I shall be born

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

It can be so refreshing...

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Sublime. There really is nothing quite like a gentle bath to cleanse away the tiredness, the monotany and the "grime" of the day, particularly if it was a bad day. There is certainly a rejuvination that comes from soaking in the warmth of clean waters, and you have captured this so beautifully.

So grateful to you, thank you my friend :) happy you liked this little one...

[Robin]

the parfum of Bliss ~

Thank you dear listening poet ~ hope all is well with you x

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is serene... inspires a revival and soothes the soul when I read this. I feel a baptism of the spirit taking place. The cleansing is a refreshing renewal of mind, body, and soul. Wonderful write, Eli... I love this!

Indeed a baptism, in death, and rebirth, thank you so much for your encouriging words love xo

[Renée]

A delightful write E. L. !

Thank you very much sweetie xx

[gombeggar]

definately a girl's dreamy concept...wutz this green old nature u speak of? ;)

kidding aside, well done poem

Thanks, I've mailed you the real meaning behind the poem. :)

[Ed Fagan]

Wow! This truly is a gift of art. Soft and beautiful.

Thank you sweet Ed!

[KAOlmsted]

Oh my god, Elisa, this is so lovely...I would cut and paste all of my favorite lines, but then this review box would merely be a copy of your poem...every line is so beautiful. I love your words so much. And, p.s. that picture up there, that is exactly how I, myself, take a bath *laugh* Really good write.

-kimmer

Thank you so much kimmer, always nice to have you by :)

[jkhatz]

I love my bathtub. I love it more than Pumpkin Spice coffee on a chilly November morning. I have half a mind to print up this marvellous ode and affix it to the window over my tub, just so I can give it daily, proper thanks.

Lovely, poetic words like a fine garment spun from gossamer silk.

Thank you a lot dear friend x