~ Perfumed

~ Lost in Oblivion

~ Perfumed

 

Bath o Bath full of etheric bliss

Drown me to life O’ Please!

Breathe me back my lost perfume

As bygone days will come

Let me dream into your petals

Whisper me underwater love

Bath o Bath of my pink rejuvenation

Wash off my green old nature

Bubble me to newer streams

Of youth where I shall be born

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

It can be so refreshing...

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Sublime. There really is nothing quite like a gentle bath to cleanse away the tiredness, the monotany and the "grime" of the day, particularly if it was a bad day. There is certainly a rejuvination that comes from soaking in the warmth of clean waters, and you have captured this so beautifully.

So grateful to you, thank you my friend :) happy you liked this little one...

[Marie]

I persoally prefer showers to baths...although you make a bath sound wonderful...somehow I'm reminded by that picture of a Frankenstein movie where his bride is born out of a bath of roses...

Thank you so much Marie, nice to hear your opinions.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Don't you have a washing machine lol?
An ethereal piece of reflection on lost time, lost feelings and well portrayed.

Thanks John, s washing machine would be total futures in the time of the poem I wrote it in.... Nice to see you by

s = a

[Tree]

A relaxing vision poetess... The idea of rejuvenation, in soothing bath appeals
to me. Thank you

You're so welcome bro, this one was to rebirth, after a bad periode.... to be young and reborn fresh, again... xo your words are always a bliss to read!

[DrD]

Refreshing, yes, but this hints of the miraculous and causes one to only wish that youth could be revisited with the knowledge of our experiences. It will never happen, of course, but one of the advantages of age is that it gives perfection to our dreams. Thanks for this one, Elisa. I loved it.

Thank you so much DrD, hey, never say never, until you enter the realm of afterlife.... you not know yet ;) Wink.... beautiful review kind sir!

[Kaylor Mason]

I wish my bathtub actually worked . . . I have to use a shower

LOL me too... I don't even have a bathtub :D ;) so that's the spirit........xo

[Chris]

Depending on your beliefs... this one is so sad OR so hopeful...

A writer writes love... and about all ;) xo thank you dearest

[Raven Starhawk]

^^* OMG just today I went to pick up some bath perfume and salts, bubblebath and so on. I am fond of Japanese Cherry Blossom myself but there are so many wonderful fragrances, And really a hot bath is something that can soothe and comfort.

You're so Kensho too love, and Koan.... I bless your spirit! one of a kind! xo thank you for reviewing this, not everyone understood this write was actually about suicide and death, to be reborn into a new youth, but it's ok.... flowers bring minds to think~ xo

[Pól]

Nice.

Good poem, too!

Go raibh míle maith agat go mór mo chara xoxo

[Pól]

Agus tu xx

:) *smiling*

[FJ Davis]

Breathtaking photo of exquisite porcelain-like beauty--encased in true porcelain; surpassed only by the sheer loveliness of your wind-chime words.
For me, E. L., a profoundly rewarding visit!

Dear friend, and lovely poet, thank you Frank, James Davis you're a wonderful creature yourself! be blessed :)