~ Perfumed

~ Lost in Oblivion

~ Perfumed

 

Bath o Bath full of etheric bliss

Drown me to life O’ Please!

Breathe me back my lost perfume

As bygone days will come

Let me dream into your petals

Whisper me underwater love

Bath o Bath of my pink rejuvenation

Wash off my green old nature

Bubble me to newer streams

Of youth where I shall be born

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

It can be so refreshing...

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Sublime. There really is nothing quite like a gentle bath to cleanse away the tiredness, the monotany and the "grime" of the day, particularly if it was a bad day. There is certainly a rejuvination that comes from soaking in the warmth of clean waters, and you have captured this so beautifully.

So grateful to you, thank you my friend :) happy you liked this little one...

[A.A.Romanczuk]

It's just what I like to do when life drives me up the wall...tis like falling into the fountain of youth!

Thank you most wise soul xx

[A.A.Romanczuk]

xx im hardly deserving of that epithet, but thank you :)

[Androglossia]

If only water could wash away the footprints of time and past mistakes so we could go back in time, be young again and undo what needs to be undone. But water only makes us ponder and it could only go that far. This poem is very meaningful. You are full of wisdom, my dear:)

Without youth, we are no future.... soon to come more of this subject.... :) so glad you loved this, dearest, till soon x

[sithlordjp]

Ah yes... The power to suspend time when submerged in the hot water... An ode to that elusive mythical Lazarus Pit (sorry for the Batman reference!) where we are restored, renewed, ready and cleaned of the sins and lies of the previous day. Confessions under water don't count as much I guess... A clean perfumed slate to face the world again. At peace, within the bubbles, where nothing seems as bad at it might be in the cold air outside... A great read, thank you for sharing! :)

Ha! LOL greatly said.... about the Batman reference :P, Thank you for your wonderful thoughts, on this old soul me, in a young body! written piece

[Mark]

Like a bath, this is pleasant, sweet and refreshing! Nice write!

Thank you so much for coming by on this older one of me :D (means a lot)

[Mark]

Very welcome!

:-)

[h d e rushin]

I like the Chopin accompaniment to this poem or is the poem an accompaniment
to Chopin. Whatever, it satisfies a need to be rejuvinated, written of course,
with your great authority. Nicely done. dana

Thank you so very much dana, for feeling me always in what I do or bring.... Chopin is one of my most favorites in the Classical Music. Although this was an older write, I'm so glad you came by, your words always lighten my day! X

[Pax]

the fragrant of this write runs free like the spirits...a sensual and pleasing bath refresh the days tiring moments... it relaxes the body and the mind... rejuvenates the old tired you...into something new and ready for the next new day....

This is an amazing write...yet again full of beautiful you....

Beautifully said sweets, yep, after bad times, new positive ones shall come... thank you dearly.

[Pax]

:) ~ no problem...
a bath a day refresh the new you ready for the next day.. :)

Yes... or the so called rebirth, afterlife... baptism, it can all be~ lol xo

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Oh, beautiful, sensual and sweet poem, sounds like magic cast? :)
i love the repeating of the words "Bath oh Bath", maybe seems alaike with "mirror mirror on the wall" ! its like hymn of renovation and pure energy of the water, which we both love :) dont forget that perfume is strong magic...

no♥r ~

I love your interpretation so pure! thank you dearest! xo

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Refreshing it is indeed. Short but powerful. What I really like about you, Elisa, is that you just know the perfect length of your poems. And you really pick such beautiful and wise choice of words. Brilliant

Thank you sweetheart. :) your words cheer me up :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like how you write about everyday things and make them so poetic...

and your stuff is so different...such variety of theme and form in your writes.


jacob

Thank you so much Jacob. It means a lot to me, I'm just a simple woman from the Netherlands, with a poetic heart~ :)