~ A Feverish Spectrum

~ A Delirium of Fever

~ A Feverish Spectrum

 

Bright sight, 

Became fuzzy in

Loves delight

She blew out the candle

With her mind reflections

Not actually thinking

Words in her head danced

And jumped chaotic

" Shall I? and will I love you?

More than myself

What is love? "

And where did it go?

“It is still with YOU  dear”

You only lost it for a moment

The candle spoke

Out of nothing

With a white mouth

Full of dripping

Candle wax…

“Sssht… keep quiet

She whispered”

Sweaty and shaky

From cold she walked

To her bedstead

Where she disappeared

So small as a leaf

Could be in the stream

Of a moving river

Floating away with

Her thoughts and

Her eyes half open

Staring at the

White starry sky…

Resting until the

Dew was born on

Morning grass

And her cat

Woke her up...

She felt her feverish

Spectrum slowly

Went away

And nothing but a

Bad cold

Remained

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

" A vision to what bad flu can bring"



Thank you xx

Reviews

[wunder]

~"" Shall I? and will I love you?
More than myself
What is love? "
And where did it go?
“It is still with YOU dear”
You only lost it for a moment
The candle spoke
Out of nothing
With a white mouth
Full of dripping
Candle wax…"
~god - this is a lovely surreal scene!!!~
~"Resting until the
Dew was born on
Morning grass"~
~I LoVe!!!~Crazy as me!!!haha!~
~it's wonderful really!!!~

Hahaha.... we share some crazyness LOL, my goodness you found it.... such a suprise to me! :) thanks a billion my friend....

[wunder]

~lol~well you mentioned it-
so i was going to find and read~
~I do love it!~

Thankies really.... good friends, and reviewers as you can't be missed! :)

[wunder]

~never a problem...i'm always here to read fer ya'~ :)

So am I there for you! :) post more more and more LOL :D

[wunder]

~ohh-i lack the motivation tonight-lol-
i'll get around to it...sometime~lol~ :))

lol, that's ok... when "pentecost, and easter are once on the same day aight? " :D ;)) x

[wunder]

~lol~ah-just been one of those days-but
i'll try to find something newer and edit
it tomorrow...i'll throw a poem together~ :)

Don't worry, I'm in a teasing mood... :) take all the time really! but some of your fans, are just waiting... for I'm not the only one who said: Post post post hehe :D

[wunder]

~lol~no worries...i still have that ill feeling from last week-
it's pissing me off...stress i think...i'll post though-promise~ :)

I know all about that... just take the day... don't worry, laugh, live, and love... the rest will come :)

[wunder]

~yeah - i need to crash - i slept at this desk last night-blah!-
i'll pop around tomorrow & see what's happening...be good~ ;)
~*peace*~

[sharonlee]

Beautifully surreal imagry EL

Thanks a lot love xx :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what a way to write about the flu...

actually a dream that could turn into a passionate love affair...and then the candle breaks the spell...drips like words of reality from a waxed stained mouth.
and there is a flicker in the dream, and reality blows out the flame...and we awake cold and shaking...no fire, just a restless dream that comes and goes like a virus...
and in the end, leaves us as we were before sleep grabbed us into this swirl of flu induced imagination.

jacob

*smiling* thank you J.

[James William Dyer]

"With a white mouth
Full of dripping
Candle wax…
" great Line

Oh thank you James :)