~ She and her Hymn

~ She and her Hymn

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~ In the Silent Land

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~ She and her Hymn


 

 

As she walked with her baggage 

In the land of silence

Thinking, freely in heathers hue

Merged as in many continents

Different depths and temperatures

Hardened feet, frozen legs

Her thoughts of the purest vision

Became ice with freedoms voice

She hiked along the fields

With her thoughts reaching snowy

Mountains in the far away

Landscapes almost bygone

By power of changing nature

Simplicity and tranquility

Rusted in the time of the year

She shall move on, within

The inevitable

Giving up will weaken her strength

As she follows her hearts hymn

To achieve those silver streams

In seasons of mercy, by walking

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2012


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Sort of reminds me of a girl just trying to find her way in life or maybe trying to flee from something. I confuse myself a lot lately, but anyway this was remarkable writing. Actually it makes me think the girl is looking for peace. I am really trying to spit out what I mean but I am just rambling. ^^*

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12 Years Ago

I value your heartfelt thoughts dear friend. xx



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If I knew where the destination that we all seem to be fighting and and struggling to reach dwelt ... I wonder if it would corrupt my senses. Good write friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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12 Years Ago

The beauty of the unknown, yes... thank you :)
Dear poetess, you had me on that slope, the cold and cutting air somehow purifying my more than aged lungs. Such a sublime write. Bravo, darling.

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12 Years Ago

Thank you my friend..

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Tags: E.L. Poetry, Free Verse, Hiking, Travel, Hearts Hymn

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