Sort of reminds me of a girl just trying to find her way in life or maybe trying to flee from something. I confuse myself a lot lately, but anyway this was remarkable writing. Actually it makes me think the girl is looking for peace. I am really trying to spit out what I mean but I am just rambling. ^^*
very beautiful image, full of deep story, travelling of the soul, we all are travellers in this world,
your mind can also fly above so many countires, mountains, climates, feelings, because needs to
seek and find the truth of the existance..I love every detail in your poem, the view from high!
thank u,dearest eli!
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12 Years Ago
I love to travel, and to mind travel, even when I read books, I can be totally into another world, I.. read moreI love to travel, and to mind travel, even when I read books, I can be totally into another world, I knowyou have that too, thank you for this beautiful comment dear :) xx
To continue to walk during hardened times to get to the "silver streams" of life, is inspiring...It is such a gratifying journey. You have written a piece that encourages the reader to follow the heart, to move on and forge through that which makes us weak...A Lovely write Eli!
i like the different natural images you have drawn in your poem..i like the comparison you have made amongst them..i felt i am taking a tour around the world from a landform to another, once i felt im on a mountain peak with all the ice and snow it is covered with, and suddenly down to the depth of a valley passing through dry deserts. it was a really enjoying tour..
Elisa, what I appreciate most about your work is that you take words into strange lands where they have never been used before and you give them life and new meanings. You use them in new forms as if they had characters of their own, never discovered until now. I delight in readying your work and thank you for giving it to us.
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12 Years Ago
Ooh thank you so very much kind sir, it is a strange brain I have, it can abduct me into the unconsc.. read moreOoh thank you so very much kind sir, it is a strange brain I have, it can abduct me into the unconscious of richest visions sometimes, I write my heart, and after I think... Yeah, I was really in A place... I guess it has to do with overwhelmed feelers of my soul, thank u for your beautiful words DrD much appreciated!
I continue to read your poetry because your work really speaks to me. There is no way for me to critique your writings; it is from the soul and the soul knows only love. Beautiful.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Oooh sweet soul you are, thanks a lot, your words mean so much to me, I hope soon I can read and rev.. read moreOooh sweet soul you are, thanks a lot, your words mean so much to me, I hope soon I can read and review more of your stunning quil, I wait patiently xxx much love to u
Sort of reminds me of a girl just trying to find her way in life or maybe trying to flee from something. I confuse myself a lot lately, but anyway this was remarkable writing. Actually it makes me think the girl is looking for peace. I am really trying to spit out what I mean but I am just rambling. ^^*