~ How do I dream you?

~ Beyond Love

~ How do I dream you?

 

 

Let me paint you in picturesque colors

I love to dream you in forms and shapes

Let us embrace the singular emptiness

Within oily colors can’t merge

But artistic new strength will arise

For where we walk in silent purge

I love to dream you freely

In the core’s brightness of the eye,

Where you will be safer then

Floating otherwise or be lost somewhere

I dream you with putting myself aside

Half awake, barely alive in space

All I see is your light my love

Wherein I can dream and die

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you.................... x

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Sigh.. why didn't I write this: ' I love to dream you freely ~ In the core’s brightness of the eye, ' .. what a deep love birthed that thought. Your picture and the accompanying words have a touch of magic. Beautiful and without guile or the urge to impress.. sincere.

Thank you hon X

[MOON]

Soulful write Elisa , to sleep perchance to dream

Thank you Moon, Take care :)

[Tree]

I often wonder Ellie if dreams and death are not one of the same. A profound poem about a subject matter that I find fascinating, good work Ellie. Thank you for making us think.

Thank you so much Diego, you and me really think likewise, You always get me! Thanks again, great thoughts :)

[Eve]

I love this, I love the lines "Let me paint you in pittoresque colors
I love to dream you in forms and shapes
Let us embrace the singular emptiness
Within oily colors can’t merge
But artistic new strength will arise
For where we walk in silent purge
I love to dream you freely
In the core’s brightness of the eye,
Where you will be safer then"

I wish I could paint everyone into safety, safe from harm, safe from judgments, there is something so magical about this write.

Thank you sister for your beautiful words, I wish the same, to your ending... Xxx

[Eve]

thank you so much oxoxox

XoXo

[Mia]

Wonderful you, with you beautiful words and there is always a softness to it. Reading it in whispers as if your secret to your love and I am just an intruder. Lovely work, which I thoroughly enjoyed.

You dear friend are never an intruder, but loved you comment, many thank yous xx

[Mia]

I'm glad for that xx

You made me laugh and happy sweet woman :) Thanks xx

[Mia]

My job here is done ;D

[gombeggar]

simply stellar, girl...quite and ebb and flow in the cosmos

Thank you deeply my friend :)

[Constance L. Hartwell]

The dream world is spectacular, is it not? You captured the essence of this mental mystery so beautifully. Kudos.

Thank you so much xx