~ Terra Spei

Tweaked World, Tweaked Thoughts, Read also my Tweaked poem, E.L. Poetry, Surreal, Philosophy, freestyle, free country, free rules.

 

~ Terra Spei

 

 

I can sit and still and

Run on my thoughts,

By deeper areas of love

Thoughts grinding as

Minced meat through a machine

Where love is one

 

I can run my thoughts,

By long paths and roads

Dreams of overlooking cornfields

With shapes like a cup of tea

Knowing it's all inside the surreal

Thoughts in me

 

I can swim in deeper seas of pleasure

Where freshwater meets salt

And where ships can moor

In the base of my soul,

Where days are bliss in

The port of Amor

 

I can walk through green valleys

Where I find mysterious creatures

The faces of my friends laughing hard

Painted as black and yellow giant bees, but

Stuck in the mud up to their knees

 

I can see freedom dance a Jive

Twinned in the tunnel of

Light usage, bonded by lifes fate

Through some dark alleys

On cobbles they hobble

With high heels on, which will break

 

I can see what I want with my thoughts

Uninhibited and carefree every day, like

Pure freedom, gives wings not to send

Nor to despise, But to fly in Terra Spei,

Of a thousand opportunities…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Music of Selah Sue. One of my favs...

HIT IT OR MISS IT... :) xoxo

Thank you :)

Reviews

[Alexander Rodgers]

I'm yet again stunned by your work, every word spoke to me. I really love,
''I can sit and still and

Run on my thoughts,

By deeper areas of love'' Amazing. The thoughts are racing to a million different things, as the human mind tends to do. I see the philosophical part in this piece too, it's a journey my friend, a journey. Once again excellent work :)

Ah dear Alex, thank you so much! :) great you see the philosophical part, that was exactly what I was trying to bring over here. I'm grateful to you! beautiful words. :)

[Alexander Rodgers]

Thank you :). Anytime friend :) I always love reading your work and reviewing it! I'm eager to read more of you, i'm never disipointed.

I feel honored with your words, :) you really read me. Thanks a lot!!

[Alexander Rodgers]

PS I like this song you put with this, it makes me want to dance haha

Haha, yes, she's my Belgium Angel... :) she has good music... :)

[Alexander Rodgers]

I really do like it, it's unique :)

She has something charismatic I think, call it Belgium guts... ;) I don't know, but I like this girl.

[NeiL ArandA]

You made it look very easy. Describing your own thoughts and going inside your mind . I wish i could do the same way and tweak it . Make major adjustments so I flow like you flow.

Ooooh thanks for loving this piece, this was a real hard one.....

I said, Oooooh thanks for loving this piece, this was a real hard one.....

I said, Oooooh thanks for loving this piece, this was a real hard one.....

LOL it won't let me post it....

I said, Oooooh thanks for loving this piece, this was a real hard one.....

See it won't let me post again, it's terrible.....

[Sugar Plum ♥]

beautiful flying world, dear eli! I`m with you as always to fly, I feel the wind in this poem of free mind and fresh air, and convinced that you can see "what you" want with your thoughts, mind and spirit is most important than all physical...(when everyone will realize that?) truely amazing!

I can run my thoughts,
By long paths and roads
Dreams of overlooking cornfields
With shapes like a cup of tea
Knowing it's all inside the surreal
Thoughts in me

So glad you felt all again here muwah xx thanks a lot x

[Sugar Plum ♥]

you are welcome, sweet eli! i love the song too :)

:)me too, It's a powerful song, with a great message xx

[Pax]

"I can see freedom dance a Jive"
~ a beautiful fine piece my friend... can freedom do boogie too..lol ;)
"Pure freedom, gives wings not to send Nor to despise, But to fly in Terra Spei"
~will you give me wings too so i can fly just to breathe the freedom for awhile... ;)
Great work my friend...

haha you make me laugh as always my dear friend... I think it can... even Tango :P
Freedom is something very nice to breathe now and then... it gives a man/woman new perspectives after a while, thank you so much for your beautiful words, always a pleasure to read your words. :)

[Pax]

:D all for fun...freedom is enjoyment...a dance is a perfect example to expressed our emotions for me...and your very much welcome my friend..

Maybe it is because I danced in my past... I used the metaphor lol, but now you say this, it's so true... it does give freedom in enjoyment :)

[Eve]

All stanzas my favorite, but this one in particular resonates, beautiful as always Ellie :) "I can swim in deeper seas of pleasure Where freshwater meets salt And where ships can moor ,In the base of my soul,
Where days are bliss in The port of Amor"
perfection :)

Thank you very much :) nice you picked those lines out xx

[Eve]

xx

:) :)

[emmajoy]

I can see freedom dance a Jive ~ Twinned in the tunnel of ~ Light usage, bonded by lifes fate ~
Through some dark alleys ~ On cobbles they hobble ~ With high heels on, which will break '

What a ride into a realm of goodness knows where and why. Elisa, and it's all yours, every comma, crossed T, word and phrase. This is a unique and utterly magically free space, created by one for one, entry by invitation only. Tis something more than ...

:) Thanks Em

[emmajoy]

You're welcome, as always. Are you smiling today, not sure?

I always smile, ( very happy person by nature, ) hope you do too today, much love, got to go, have an appointment, will go through your work later, xx

[emmajoy]

noooo..no need to review back.. hope you're ok.. just a feeling

Yes, love I am, better each day... :) just crazy busy... till soon!