~ Amor

~ We know where I rest

 

~ Amor

 

 

Your whispering Amor

Makes me dwell in silent bliss

Trusted as former times

We embraced

 

In the land of purity I rest

Where everything is

As light from our richest skies

On a spring day

 

Clouds only walk on a fair

Road of velocity

Within a soft breeze they

Turn into white pillows

To let rest my thoughts on

 

Without trees there is no oxygen

For my lungs to breathe

And without the sun nothing

Would be so green

Without mountains all would be so flat

As I feel myself the rain

 

Your whispering Amor

Reaches further than my genes

It touches days back into the past

And give miracle birth for new days

Within your silence my heart beats

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

For me the key is to balance, too much love can overkill, to less can kill you too...

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Belle]

The title is intense.
The first stanza puts me under spell.
Your color scheme-- I LOVE.
Author's note is very agreeable.
As what the law of the mean stated:
anything in state of being deficient and in excess can be poisonous.

Wonderful work again Dearest.

Thank you so much for your beautiful words Belle. Love to you!

[Belle]

Reading from you is always a pleasure. Love to you too. xoxo

Makes me smile dear one :) xx

[Robbie~xoxo~]

The first stanza grabbed me!...Written perfectly to capture the "silent bliss", indeed!
Your words are like a cashmere blanket... soft, warm, and comforting. This is a lovely work of art, dear Eli! Truly Romantic!... So glad to read you again! xoxo

Thank you so much x

[~]

Thank you my all, I so loved your words, X Hou van jou schatje :)

HOVJ! :) X

[Corset]

You really could have no clue how happy and relieved I am that you are back.
I think i'll just wrap myself up in this one and sit here quietly for a bit and bask in it's beauty and love :)

I don't believe myself yet I'm back.... I guess it goes automaticaly lol... Thank you so much dear friend for your words. They always warm my heart with love, and light. Hugs!

[Corset]

hugs!

I am going to a party right now, I will be back later to read your beautiful works of art... X

[Corset]

ohh, I hope you had a great time at your party! Thanks El :)

Lol ooooh it was amazing, we ate paddo's and sniffed cocain, no just kidding, it was a b-day of my sister in law, amazing! :D:D:D and I played with her new born sun, (my nepphew) a lot, I felt like being a mom soon too.... ♥

Sun= Son, as he is the sun really that confused me... :) xx love to you

[Corset]

Lol ooooh it was amazing, we ate paddo's and sniffed cocain, " you should have seen how my mouth dropped open before I say "the just kidding" I wasn't shocked that you would, just that you would say it here! hahaaa!
oh Ellie! That is so fine feeling those yearnings to start a family, you know how that happens right? LOL! if not send me an email and I'll explain heheee!

It was Dutch joke haha... Lol you're funny ha

[Nautili]

lovely, Eli. Glad you are back! I felt terrible knowing i never said goodbye!

I needed some space from here, I'm glad I'm back now, my hearts ink probably never stops writing.... Thank you