~ Amor

~ We know where I rest

 

~ Amor

 

 

Your whispering Amor

Makes me dwell in silent bliss

Trusted as former times

We embraced

 

In the land of purity I rest

Where everything is

As light from our richest skies

On a spring day

 

Clouds only walk on a fair

Road of velocity

Within a soft breeze they

Turn into white pillows

To let rest my thoughts on

 

Without trees there is no oxygen

For my lungs to breathe

And without the sun nothing

Would be so green

Without mountains all would be so flat

As I feel myself the rain

 

Your whispering Amor

Reaches further than my genes

It touches days back into the past

And give miracle birth for new days

Within your silence my heart beats

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

For me the key is to balance, too much love can overkill, to less can kill you too...

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Belle]

The title is intense.
The first stanza puts me under spell.
Your color scheme-- I LOVE.
Author's note is very agreeable.
As what the law of the mean stated:
anything in state of being deficient and in excess can be poisonous.

Wonderful work again Dearest.

Thank you so much for your beautiful words Belle. Love to you!

[Belle]

Reading from you is always a pleasure. Love to you too. xoxo

Makes me smile dear one :) xx

[Chris]

Very mellow...

That's a lovely word, of many meanings.
Thank you so much Chris.

[Chris]

And I meant it in all its shades Eli...

take care.

Without light, indead there wouldn't be shades... thanks Chris you too take care :)

[Pratik]

I loved this Eli.. It preaches acceptance without getting preachy rather it soaks you in a tender soothing touch that makes you stretch back comfortably in you armchair to say to yourself that everything is fine.... Truly all the contrasts, the stark opposites in nature is Her way to embrace the multitudes of diverse humanity, flora and fauna in a harmonious co existence... Life is beautiful!!
Welcome back... I will say it again, the cafe would not have been the same without you... :) You are one of those people who make this place special. :)

Thank you so very much my dear friend for your well review. It means much to me to have your opinion! have a nice day! :) X Eli

[Pax]

The passion grows in your write, the beauty of nature shines...
and about the author's note i remember the song... too much love will kill you...in which i really agree...moderation is the key...a balance of all things...
Wonderful write my friend.

Oooh yes, that song, now I remember it too... great you remind me. I will post the link on your page :P haha... it was that good old queen yep. Thank you so much for popping by dearest friend :)xx

[Pax]

yes....i love that song too...thank you... and your welcome...also you know all too well I'm always here...

I hope I will be here forever too... thank you

[Tree]

Yes, balance... Very good structure here, and I love the passion, the underlying fire. You speak about a love that keeps you warm, but doesn't burn... Very hard to find that kind of love, but this poem made me warm

Exactly dear one. You nailed it, I had love in the far away past, that did burn, and it meant the end of a relationship... it was overkilled love. I need love that let me breathe, love and let me live love, in a lifetime... Thank you Diego!

[Southern Cross]

The author's note is very insightful..The poem simply beautiful and the imagery so intense..Thank you for sharing.

Thank you so much :)

[Shelley Holt-Lowrey]

This is such a light and luminous piece. It shines and radiates. No better way to describe it. I rarely see love described in such a way that makes me smile and think - yeah! That's it. Too often it is weighted down in sugary sweet prose or words that make my blood sugar spike high. This writing hits at exactly the place where "love" is felt. Beauty here.

Thank you so much dear for this beautiful review, your meaning means much to me x

[Revery]

Just stunning Elisa, I am always impressed with the beauty of your verse. I especially enjoyed the metaphors,

"Without trees there is no oxygen
For my lungs to breathe
And without the sun nothing
Would be so green
Without mountains all would be so flat"

Thank you for sharing.

Thank you so much, I value your thoughts my friend :)

[Mark]

You are wise. I love the feeling of the clouds, walking, the understanding that everything is needed, clouds, mountains.... and using Amor, maybe that's a personal thing? But it fits well in your poem.

This is a write with 4 aspects of love I felt in my life, mixed into nu core. Thank you so much my friend :)

* one core sorry, auto correct stood on Dutch from my phone

[Mark]

LOL auto correct is frustrating enough in one language, I can't imagine having to deal with two or more.

Haha, yes, what's app to dutch friends, and then with English, very confusing sometimes

[no sun]

So forever in search of the perfect amount of love...makes for great poetry. It flows well, it is written well, it has great work choices and the style is perfect. Bare with me, I'm trying to find point racking ways to say it is brilliant. How'd I do??
Only 4 points, geez I need to take a course in reviewing poetry. So much easier to review food and sports.

Thank you Ethan :)