~ Amor

~ We know where I rest

 

~ Amor

 

 

Your whispering Amor

Makes me dwell in silent bliss

Trusted as former times

We embraced

 

In the land of purity I rest

Where everything is

As light from our richest skies

On a spring day

 

Clouds only walk on a fair

Road of velocity

Within a soft breeze they

Turn into white pillows

To let rest my thoughts on

 

Without trees there is no oxygen

For my lungs to breathe

And without the sun nothing

Would be so green

Without mountains all would be so flat

As I feel myself the rain

 

Your whispering Amor

Reaches further than my genes

It touches days back into the past

And give miracle birth for new days

Within your silence my heart beats

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

For me the key is to balance, too much love can overkill, to less can kill you too...

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Belle]

The title is intense.
The first stanza puts me under spell.
Your color scheme-- I LOVE.
Author's note is very agreeable.
As what the law of the mean stated:
anything in state of being deficient and in excess can be poisonous.

Wonderful work again Dearest.

Thank you so much for your beautiful words Belle. Love to you!

[Belle]

Reading from you is always a pleasure. Love to you too. xoxo

Makes me smile dear one :) xx

[J. J. Nightingale]

You meet my soul
Even the silence tells
First breath to last
We are complete
We are one ..

Beautiful thoughts of love .. tender ................ Jazz :)

Thanks love and soul, I'm so glad you could connect dear.... Huggers :)))

[J. J. Nightingale]

(((Hugs))) :) ............

:-) I am happy to be around you ♥

[J. J. Nightingale]

DITTO ..

[Clayton Bardwell]

So beautiful and wise. All things in moderation, if only I could learn that lesson.

Thank you very much sir, for your "wise" words, and the compliment. It is good to have you by.

[Adam M. Snow]

Truly a piece of art

Thank you so much Adam :)

[Adam M. Snow]

You are most welcome

:-) smile

[Antonio Valentino]

In the land of purity I rest

Where everything is

As light from our richest skies

On a spring day



Clouds only walk on a fair

Road of velocity

Within a soft breeze they

Turn into white pillows

To let rest my thoughts on



these two verses dripped like nectar from the fairest petals soft..

hurt by chocolat, death by love.. yes

luvlee!

Oooh thank you so much for picking those two out! dear friend, :D
You have the nectar totally glued on your precious warm soul and feelers! thank you for visiting me and enjoying my poem! x

[Antonio Valentino]

i especially liked the second one I copied..

thanks for letting me enjoy you
read morei especially liked the second one I copied..

thanks for letting me enjoy you

special always, are you..

And thanks for saying that, it means the world to me, you're too my dearest friend pal, and crazy buddy :D Always have much fun with you!

[Antonio Valentino]

ever is, sweetest you

you are the cries of laughter, in my heart..

:-) I must weep of happiness now.... :D so are you!

[Antonio Valentino]

Tears of dew, tween me and you..

Poetic wonder :P

[Kenneth The Poet]

Blissful and minty fresh.

Kenneth pal, how are you? thanks for the read, and time on here... I have to catch up a lot I know.... ;-)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Good, that's OK. Same here.

:-) You know I go all the way dig your library as I'm a huge fan of yours! can't wait to find the perfect rest and time for it...

[David Scott]

I would have to ditto my review of Amor II
Lovely E. L.

Oh thank you so much David, your reviews always make me smile :-)

[FJ Davis]

A healthy portion--indeed, potion--of the just-right; that generally accepted comfort represented by Baby Bear's bed.
Yes, E. L., balance makes it all that much sweeter, that much longer lasting.

Thanks a lot Frank :) so true

[Sugar Plum ♥]

yes, very true, dear eli! Ballance in all, also in the way we love, in order to be happier! your poem holds purity, captures the ballance in nature, as well as in human, we need to have little from all, and appreciate it...so lovely!

In the land of purity I rest
Where everything is
As light from our richest skies
On a spring day

It is... too much can kill you, too less too... Many thank yous love x

[DrD]

Oh, Hoe de Nederlanders voelen! I love your love of life and living things. The undestanding that everything is equally alive and has the right to be. I share that belief and long for a better world, knowing all the while that the only way it could happen is if it was returned to the animals and plants. Thanks for this fine work.

Wow you speak Dutch? such a fantastic line you gave me! thank you! it's so true. You nailed it. Thank you sir, you've a bit of a pagan heart. Love it . Our mother nature GAIA is higly on my list... you will find out ;) indeed everything has a soul.... in my ancient roots too, so many thank yous

[lost girl]

I think I may stay here for many moments wandering your poetic halls, listening to your soulful melodies, being embraced by your blissful words/thoughts....."speechless" doesn't happen for me often ....but now I shall go wander and be silent. :)

:) I bow in silence to you seeker...
Thank you so much