~ Nemesis

Fill it in yourself, life is a Poem, of fiction, or truth....

~  Nemesis

 

 

 

There where land is, my bare feet root

In forgotten shores of land barely seen

Justice feed my toe nails, in every taken step

Of silence the pale skin is aware of winters hunger

Cold sorrows which became sweaty on my backs justice

In contradiction of many Nemesis soul longings

Of the souls spread sparkling glimpses

Waste away like quicksand under their sins

There where cold shores became warmer

 

There where sea is, I feed Nemesis,

As I dance with her pure spirit

In denial of her toxic I drink her blood

To sail darker seas of mighty pleasures

To sniff the thoughts of others brainy deep

Led by the evil wind, they gasp

Which perpetuates sail my silent ship

And on their poor fate I sail over an ocean

To find, the purity back and blow it in their minds

 

Darker days shall come, in winters hearts

When you shiver to fall asleep

In mind surrounded by a blanket of love

Longing for the days you made another black

But nothing lasts as a cold bare breeze

Feeding your lost soul into pure refrain from the cold

Regret having the days when your soul reflected

Pure warmth in the sun rising morning

Wherever you every minute was used to your

Inner voice to dance, even though you felt tons of sorrow

 

There where death longs harder than you’ll survive

Woods have no trees, left with leaves,

But are finished to forever rot and freeze in

Winters cold, unless they call an un forgiven

Purity with a breath of warm hearted spring

And a voice of innocence and sincerity

The one which they lost inside for a long time

Within themselves as it always felt among them if they look that

Carefully inside their combative but still dear souls

 

There where life is, stronger than sorrow

And where malice has found a place to rest forever and

There where all is equal, in some mazes of life you have passed,

Where light is brighter than your inner gutter of failure

Nemesis, speaks your justice, breathes as fair as an Angel in

Disguise where you heard your voice calling your

Left eye to your right, your ears spread neurotic alert and

Your tongue and mouth could sing forgotten notes

 

Justice, in all honor, is calling your name, in echoes

Between the daily gift your heart is still beating

And believe me, it will come to all the right corners

If you choose to live, you shall be rewarded with

The simple pleasures you've missed for so long

You will be happier than a little child safe at home

Blinded or failed, healed or nailed there is a room for everyone

A heart chamber open even for those who have sinned my head off.

I'm still breathing, and I’m resting half way

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Souladareatease]

Deep and true is the level of this fine Ink!!!
tis a darker day than usual for me...but this will change, but runs alongside with Your excellent Write...forever the key to fulfilled life is Heart...time (that which has been named)moves slower when used...and if lucky enough to find Your perfect half then well...as You say...Happier than a child...
it is key to Youth, vigor, and shows life as Living...living with purpose...This being said...one who is alone who can use the heart in it's giving manner can equally receive fulfilled life. those that look to smother it or mar it's light...sadly abound within our beautiful world...such as moth to light...I expressed that on anothers write, but it seems there truly IS magnetism betwixt the dark and light...but when dark is overcome by being vigilant within the hearts use...dark seems to subside for lengthy amount...forever I have contemplated much upon this...we know certain laws of things...feeding negativity breeds it ,so many ways to say it...so on and so on ...but whatever it is....no matter how pious or good natured one lives Your faced to front a negative...when You push through there is the lull...but then after time...it swings back in....either as ultimately "test" or needing to feed because light is becoming too strong...makes me wonder of whether it may be ONE original reasoning's monks closed themselves off (other than the obvious ones) then their only nature of negativity faced is between a small group and nature...or nature of the self...I have watched many live in constant negativity...and they eat sleep and breathe it...yet still we keep the golden heart and push through the black...and as always....safety has better chances when two hearts are beating as one to fend off the bleak things...but always somewhere lurking in nemesis ...is another test or push from the dark......this truly was a wonderful and inspiring write Elisa...May the Pure Hearts always win out--I like to think they will-in turn making time-their b***h!!!

Whoa, what a nice review, my friend, I need to let it land for a while... thank you so much for your time and effort.... :) you get this very well on many points. I feel humbled...

[Souladareatease]

It's a touching Write!!!-always humbled-I thank You for sharing!!!

I'm flabbergasted.... really, you explain things so clearly and well, on this... great minds alike. I thank you again... :D

[writing mojo]

you rooked my head off with this mind souled chess game and the pieces of this intercepting, intersecting peace, should be plastered on car window shields, never making wrong turns again....fantastic

Thank you my weatherman, and navigator :D these words are stunning! :)

[Priscilla Sayers]

Oh, my darling sister! How did you ever get separated from Robbie and me! You infuse into the middle of our Gemini like souls, our own " missing link"! This beautiful written Art paints the very essence of our connection,as you teach the masses what it means to rest, the importance of nurturing the soul... Thoughts that actively surface to show the wisdom of the deeper soul, one who has found her path back to herself, back to faith, and my lovely sister, I am so proud. I am so relieved, to have found you. Never will I let you go. This poem speaks volumes and I pray the "masses" will not only understand, but absorb it, learn from it, and apply it to their lives. Thank you for creating such an important piece, And letting the brilliance of your soul's light shine through it!

Thank you so much sweet sis Pris :) xoxo oh, really wow, what a beautiful review dear, you have painted with me my artist! :) you get the meaning of it so well, Thank you for your words, sending Love and light your way XXX :)

[Priscilla Sayers]

XOXO!

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Beautiful, as always I`m lost in your labyrinth of deep thoughts, visions of life, simplicity vs. complication, love, breath, all flow of your mind and spirit, its like i`m in the maze of life, not sure which way is the right...your images are full with references and vivid! i loved this specially -

There where sea is, I feed Nemesis,
As I dance with her pure spirit
In denial of her toxic I drink her blood
To sail darker seas of mighty pleasures

[Sugar Plum ♥]

i love the dress of the woman in photo :) always wanted to have such..

:)) again thank you so much... Xx

[Arun Paul Kapur]

Still so mesmerised by your work :)

Thank you deeply Arun, Namaste.

[Pax]

a dark tale indeed...deeply profound thoughts...an inner voice speaking to pages of the writes...
I enjoyed the deep emotion showed in this write..

Thank you so much! your opinion is always appreciated! :)

[Pax]

your always welcome my friend...

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I love this dark tale of the Nemesis... you have described souls that have lost "a voice of innocence and sincerity"/"And where malice has found a place to rest forever"...and yet, there is a forgiveness that lingers for those who choose to live (happily)... "A heart chamber opened"/ "There is room for everyone"
You have brilliantly written a captivating piece, which gives a mesmerizing vision! Bravo!

Thank you for your keen insight sis X

[Corset]

even for those who have sinned my head off...lol, Ellie I have missed you! This poem rocks and it feels with such joy to be reading you again, so many lines in this are just wonderful, I am so glad you are back in the saddle this place was a wee bit darker without you :(

LOL haha, you make me laugh, and roll my skull for another time on the floor, :D missed you too hun! I was just and still am on vacation, but I will be more around I promise love! xoxo thank you so much! :) tomorrow I'm reading you too, so jet-lagged....