~ Nemesis

Fill it in yourself, life is a Poem, of fiction, or truth....

~  Nemesis

 

 

 

There where land is, my bare feet root

In forgotten shores of land barely seen

Justice feed my toe nails, in every taken step

Of silence the pale skin is aware of winters hunger

Cold sorrows which became sweaty on my backs justice

In contradiction of many Nemesis soul longings

Of the souls spread sparkling glimpses

Waste away like quicksand under their sins

There where cold shores became warmer

 

There where sea is, I feed Nemesis,

As I dance with her pure spirit

In denial of her toxic I drink her blood

To sail darker seas of mighty pleasures

To sniff the thoughts of others brainy deep

Led by the evil wind, they gasp

Which perpetuates sail my silent ship

And on their poor fate I sail over an ocean

To find, the purity back and blow it in their minds

 

Darker days shall come, in winters hearts

When you shiver to fall asleep

In mind surrounded by a blanket of love

Longing for the days you made another black

But nothing lasts as a cold bare breeze

Feeding your lost soul into pure refrain from the cold

Regret having the days when your soul reflected

Pure warmth in the sun rising morning

Wherever you every minute was used to your

Inner voice to dance, even though you felt tons of sorrow

 

There where death longs harder than you’ll survive

Woods have no trees, left with leaves,

But are finished to forever rot and freeze in

Winters cold, unless they call an un forgiven

Purity with a breath of warm hearted spring

And a voice of innocence and sincerity

The one which they lost inside for a long time

Within themselves as it always felt among them if they look that

Carefully inside their combative but still dear souls

 

There where life is, stronger than sorrow

And where malice has found a place to rest forever and

There where all is equal, in some mazes of life you have passed,

Where light is brighter than your inner gutter of failure

Nemesis, speaks your justice, breathes as fair as an Angel in

Disguise where you heard your voice calling your

Left eye to your right, your ears spread neurotic alert and

Your tongue and mouth could sing forgotten notes

 

Justice, in all honor, is calling your name, in echoes

Between the daily gift your heart is still beating

And believe me, it will come to all the right corners

If you choose to live, you shall be rewarded with

The simple pleasures you've missed for so long

You will be happier than a little child safe at home

Blinded or failed, healed or nailed there is a room for everyone

A heart chamber open even for those who have sinned my head off.

I'm still breathing, and I’m resting half way

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Souladareatease]

Deep and true is the level of this fine Ink!!!
tis a darker day than usual for me...but this will change, but runs alongside with Your excellent Write...forever the key to fulfilled life is Heart...time (that which has been named)moves slower when used...and if lucky enough to find Your perfect half then well...as You say...Happier than a child...
it is key to Youth, vigor, and shows life as Living...living with purpose...This being said...one who is alone who can use the heart in it's giving manner can equally receive fulfilled life. those that look to smother it or mar it's light...sadly abound within our beautiful world...such as moth to light...I expressed that on anothers write, but it seems there truly IS magnetism betwixt the dark and light...but when dark is overcome by being vigilant within the hearts use...dark seems to subside for lengthy amount...forever I have contemplated much upon this...we know certain laws of things...feeding negativity breeds it ,so many ways to say it...so on and so on ...but whatever it is....no matter how pious or good natured one lives Your faced to front a negative...when You push through there is the lull...but then after time...it swings back in....either as ultimately "test" or needing to feed because light is becoming too strong...makes me wonder of whether it may be ONE original reasoning's monks closed themselves off (other than the obvious ones) then their only nature of negativity faced is between a small group and nature...or nature of the self...I have watched many live in constant negativity...and they eat sleep and breathe it...yet still we keep the golden heart and push through the black...and as always....safety has better chances when two hearts are beating as one to fend off the bleak things...but always somewhere lurking in nemesis ...is another test or push from the dark......this truly was a wonderful and inspiring write Elisa...May the Pure Hearts always win out--I like to think they will-in turn making time-their b***h!!!

Whoa, what a nice review, my friend, I need to let it land for a while... thank you so much for your time and effort.... :) you get this very well on many points. I feel humbled...

[Souladareatease]

It's a touching Write!!!-always humbled-I thank You for sharing!!!

I'm flabbergasted.... really, you explain things so clearly and well, on this... great minds alike. I thank you again... :D

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

This is one of those ethereal and sublime pieces that truly deserves to be read, praised, and then read again. You have such a way with words, my friend; you chain together language that one would not imagine going together so perfectly, and yet you make it work every time.

Feeding your lost soul into pure refrain from the cold
Regret having the days when your soul reflected
Pure warmth in the sun rising morning

This section was one of my favorites. I love the idea of "soul reflected", as the reflection of the soul is the reflection of the true self embodied in the atmosphere of life itself. There is nothing more beautiful than truly seeing one's soul bared and vulnerable, because that means that you are seeing pure truth and pure emotion.

This was well written, my friend, in your own unique style.

Thank you so much Sarah, for saying so. :) I'm so happy you found all you say in my little words... my friend. :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Your words are anything but little, my dear...they are enormous...

Thank you humbly x

[ObscurityNone]

This is absolutely gorgeous, Hermana. Out of what I have read from you this has a completely different feel, though so... solemnly sanguine, it's quite tranquil in a perilous manner, something truly great.

Hermanito, your words are like the male (almost) Nemesis, made up right in my mind lol brought here on my page. Lovely. Thank you for your eloquent words.

- Eli

[ObscurityNone]

You're most welcome.

[PurpleQuartz]

Your poems are always a journey. And as like every poem I have read of yours, this was brilliant. Full of heart.

Thank you for reviewing, and the well felt message, yes , I'm a traveler, a nomad not too long happy on one place, :) makes me smile you saw that through my writers, xxx

[PurpleQuartz]

: D Its amazing how there's always a story in a story itself :)

Oh yes, it is.... For words dance my life, when I don't dance pity enough anymore.. :)

[captain]

wow, what a read!

:) yeah....

[Ken Simm.]

Wishes, some good some not so. Wanting and not wanting. A very erudite but ethereal write.

Thank you Ken, for your opinion and thoughts, always appreciated :)

[Olga Kisska]

beautiful ly nice
you are favorite of a friend
very very dreamy and eary wonderful
I want to write like this ,WOW
gothic beauty with lots of details
wunderful writeing
i love this
XOX

Thank you very much sweet Olga :)

[MOON]

Beautiful write Elisa heartfelt and so many good lines to quote , there is room for everyone deep and sometimes dak but redemption too!

There is always room for everyone yes!!!! thanks for seeing that xxx I will come back for you my friend :)

[Cassie Fraga]

OH MY.... sis. this whole piece, the format, the color, the pic and music..... this write really takes you in. a very well rounded piece of art this is Eli. BEAUTIFUL!!!

Sooo good to see you're back, In a while I'm too, just now so many things on my mind... I am off and on.... love to you my beautiful sis, and thank you for your lovely words XXX

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I can read this time and time again. The music sets the tone and brings my mind to a higher dimension....another realm of thought that I never expected could manifest in my mind. You push the limits of imagination, and I go there. Thank you dear Eli! You're a divine writer! Glorious write!

Thank you so much love :) also for your mail, does me so good.... you guys are amazing. Muwah xxxx