~ Cycloid

~ To be in the right circle, you have to know yourself first.

 

~ Cycloid

 

Deep expression, twisted by circles

Round eyes look at you, and know you

Distraction and quiet strength, is disguised

In her mysterious presence

 

The harder you try to analyze her

The harder she will run in circles,

There is no obligation to give your soul

To others and a point where you already have been

 

People will naturally arrive and see the center

Where one can rest in the eye of the storm

But before, they are so fierce looking for an excuse

And hope to find it in another’s failure

 

Men just run aswell; in circles around your back

Up to a point they think you're weak prey

Power lust is not attractive, it stinks

And makes wrong circles with wrong ink

 

In the circle of life and death it

Is not important to make even bigger cycloids

The content with little, is the greatest circle

Nothing good comes with half ones...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

~ Be in the right circle, then all will turn out well...

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Olga Kisska]

These are big dreams ,and full dreams
All in for life and for the life pleasure
my spirit like domovye feels a life with this beautiful poem
I am happily sad -thank you for this
your poem and music notes teach each other to help me too !
I love how i feel right now
life -All in
XOX

Da!!! :) spasiba Krasavista :) XX

[Vyse Cross]

It's beautiful indeed, one of the most heart-felt things, and inspirational. When knowing, without knowing, is shown, and through a lovely way.

Exactly that's for me a kind of a mantra to love and live by :) x thanks so much!

[captain]

the wisdom in this write shows how deep you have touched life. We keep on going round for its what life is all about as i percieved it, its will be a sad end if its half way through, so we keep going. Great write, beautiful one!

Thank you captain, you remind me of one of my best buddy's! who have said the same! loved this review! :) thank you greatly!

[Sirius King]

i think everything in life will eventually come full circle, whether its positive or negative, it depends on what u put into it

sometimes i find myself going through the same cycle, or the cycles that's been repeated by my parents or loved ones... when i recognize it, its motivation to do something different, or begin a new positive cycle...

great write, thanks for sharing!

Thank you very much

[Judas Hammer]

nice write. I feel myself running in circles many times myself, at least I know I am not alone

Thank you dear poet for this tail hunting, circled review, loved it! xo

[Constance L. Hartwell]

Keep your circle positive, that's one of my favorite mantras! In life and in the universe, everything is full circle. Nothing stays the same and that can be such a beautiful thing depending on how we look at it. This was a wonderfully written piece full of wisdom and love.

Thanks dear friend, for picking this all out! you're wonderful yourself! xoxo

[Revery]

Your so talented dear, always amazed how you can express yourself. This is a another example of your wisdom and love or all that is good. :)

Thank you so much dear Revery, nice to have you by! your words mean much to me! :)

[Corset]

Wonderful guidance in here, wisdom and love warms the frost from the buds in the circle of life, death too has it's turn on the wheel,
" People will naturally arrive and see the center
Where one can rest in the eye of the storm
But before, they are so fierce looking for an excuse
And hope to find it in another’s failure"

beautiful ....so pure I feel the tension releasing from my neck, thank you, I love this music, it lifts me
and makes me feel so peaceful. hugs!!!!

Thank you Corset for your wonderful thoughts. And words. xx

[emmajoy]

Perhaps tis better to make your own circles, saves you getting giddy at other people's expense or control! There's always a speck of space to allow entry . Strange how so many people rush through life these days, not realising that they're getting closwer to the end every second! Maybe we should take a leaf out of Mother Earth's life and enjoy the seasons, pausing at each and every one .. maybe life would be fuller .. maybe we'd all reach a destination that means more than commodities .. Somehow your words have birthed thoughts in me, will come back, dear friend..and please, so must you.

Thank you so much dear friend, for your thoughts, It is so lovely to read each other thought I sofar got here. Beneath yours I tried to explain to Xanthous Crow, how the Math Cycloid for me turns... but all can be filled in, as human beings turn in circles, and all is based on them, think about it how many invisible circles, or not noticed ones are turning... it's marvelous to philosophize about it. Loved your words, I will come back always, like you too! xoxo

[emmajoy]

I can't understand maths, it's my bete noire .. can't do technology either .. but will bow to any knowledge, love.. truly will and admire your thinking. Tis strange that i saw your words as emotive guess maths really does have feelings!

[emmajoy]

(comma after emotive .. )

It does have.... that's why it's so interesting, This write could be seen in so many layers. That was also my intention. I'm a technician, but math, was always my worst at school, was better in languages, but same time it always intrigued me to be better at it. You're such a sweets! thanks for all!

[emmajoy]

1 + 1 = the uprights needed for a length of fencing .. 1 + 2 = a double seat at the cinema .. 2 + 2 = is anyone's guess! You see how i look at maths now, don't you! xx

Hahaha, you're amazing! xxx

[emmajoy]

on a scrap of paper i scribbled some more of those but, another time, love. Must away to find something to eat. Will pour a glass of red wine first, helps me think about the quickest thing to thaw!

Oh, good appetite dear! and cheers on you!

[Xanthous Crow]

Hmm... interesting poem! It has a vague dream-like quality to it, which is always a good thing. I especially like the focus on circles in this one; the circle of life, the circle of birth and death, social circles. It brings to mind the image of Ouroboros, the dragon devouring its own tail; the end ("tail") is destroyed, but the circle never ends.

The sense of mystery surrounding the female figure ("she", "her") is interesting, as you said, the harder you try to peer at her and analyze who and what she is, the harder it'll become. But also, the sense of advice here is great - avoid the wrong circles, such as greedy or half-circles. Fairly wise advice; nothing good usually stems from them.

"Men just run as well; in circles around your back/Up to a point they think you're weak prey." Very nice imagery here! Very good read.

Thank you very much dear X.C. Your thoughts are brilliant, but about the Ouroboros, it wasn't that much, more the math part of circles, and how they can have effect on all of us, in all we see it back..... the Cycloid is always a thing what intrigued me...



Thank you for your words!!! and wonderful review!! all could be!

[Xanthous Crow]

Quite welcome! Ahh, the mathematics are something that are beyond me.... I could never grasp them.

Me either so much, that's why I loved to think this squared out, in every cirlce :D haha...it's so nice each and everyone has great refreshing and new insights, that all could be... lovely! it means it's all interwoven in humans nature, so interesting.