~ Free Flight

~ A Hungarian poetic story of love, the love she felt for her love, and free love... at where he is, or might be ~

 

~ Free Flight

 

 

The view from my front porch

Inspires me to play again

The freedom in my blood

Flows through my veins

 

The sky is more blue than ever

And the birds fly free above

The flow of the stream is

Hurtling me inspiration

 

The days where we danced

Are unfortunately no longer,

But nothing is keeping me

In order for you to play

 

My song to you, humming;

To touch your sensitive strings

My heart for you to feel

I will always love and shall recall

 

And you do dream on days

Like this, where nothing hold me back

Where I am free and fly

In the thoughts I give you my

 

Love song, and explanation

On your soul where

You will see me again encounter

If our paths will cross again

 

And I find my way, as you yours

Days are with us, no sorrow

We celebrate life,

We sing and make music

 

In and after death, I will play for you

My musical thoughts flow with you

Your soul will be resurrected

In the light of the band that we have

 

Just fly, 

Fly my angel…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

~ A Hungarian poetic story of love, the love she felt for her love, and free love... at where he is, or might be ~



Thank you xx

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

This is a very intriguing piece... I could not figure out who's the muse here... Was it a onetime encounter on a stage or were they both in the band and parted ways ..yet their love for music continues... They now walk a separate path and gone their separate ways ... yet perhaps and who knows maybe their path may cross again... There's no doubt about it. They both love music and play instruments...

It's just my love for Hungary

Sorry my friend, WC is glitching, I said: It's just my love for Hungary, and Europe in general, and when I was there, I had a wonderful time, listening their gipsy and nomad music, traveling through old streets, sniffing the air.... Hungary is a muse. :) as many other countries here in Europe.... :) I love your reviews always, they make my heart smile :) Neil!! xx

[NeiL ArandA]

ahhh ....your thoughts are so deep...I thought i could decipher it ....LOL thanks for the tip...

They are, oops, sorry :P :) I am reading you, you make me smile again!

[Corset]

what could i add to what mr. Valentino has already said? Our Ellie we come to you to heal our moments within your light. You are a well from which we drink, you touch our life and put songs into our hearts. oxoxooxox

Thank you dear honey for your beautiful words, love to you xx

[Pax]

romance runs in your veins my friend..romantic and lovely write!!!!!

Haha thanks, :)

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I could not agree with Antonio more, you are a very special person/ writer, dear Elisa. I love this piece. It is so vibrant and colorful, and the words practically melt off the meter. Great job---as usual :)

-Cord

Thanks Cord, nice to have you around :) always!

[quinfinn]

this is breathtakingly romantic and i adore the soul who says such sweet and complete songs of love and promises...this poem is the romantic's guilty pleasure for sure ...what beauty and life lies within these words/

Thank you Quinny, ooops, Quinfinn, lol, it's written to every spirit we lost, and how gipsy's handle with it, full of respect, and how you can almost even celebrate a past away soul... :)

[Antonio Valentino]

you know what Elisa, you are, The Writers Cafe

you and a few other special people

you are the poets poet, i can read it and feel it in everything that you write.. you have such an exuberant soul that just resonates love and light and compassion and passion.. just know that this place just wouldnt be the same without you here.. it would lack its smile, and reach of your loving spirit

how lucky are the ones who have you grace them each and every day

(((always stay that special you)))

:))

Awww my goodie and dear buddy, thank you so much for this real meant and heartfelt review, makes me smile from ear to ear. You always make my day! thanks dear one! so glad you enjoyed it.

[Antonio Valentino]

i enjoy them especially because they come from you.. :)

Smiling...

[Sami Khalil]

What an inspiring write and with elegant artistic form and style... A free love is the best of all love for it loves unconditionally and without favors in return ... Thank you for penning and bringing a different flavor to this site from all the Cliche...

Oh thank you dear Sami, yes, this was a write to let see how past away ones can be honored. With music, love, and sang... :)

[Art Sun]

enchanting piece...

Thank you my friend... just a poetic story of here

[Art Sun]

still...there are many islands...

I'm an Island lover, my ancestors are from Java, and Banda, Indonesian and Mollucan, mom is too... Went to many Islands in my life, Spanish, Greek, etc etc...

*Moluccan, Am I an doomed dyslectic? LOL

[Art Sun]

probably...ha ha...

Hahahhahaha....... Where were/ all that Scorpion English, jeez, let me breathe haha

[Art Sun]

funny...

Somtimes, it's so frustrating to write all in your language.... to get understood, while nobody does in mine... but it's ok lol...

I do it, because i'm a learner, and I want to be all-round over the world, and it never ever has let me down when I was in other countries. So it has the positive sites :D

[Art Sun]

I have seen your improvement as you continue to write...I am sure it is frustrating but you are doing well...keep striving...

[Poetic Beauty]

It is a beautiful tale of grieving and moving on. Of a soul finding peace after the death of someone dear. I like the last two lines but really this whole piece held my attention.

Thank you very much sweetie

[Poetic Beauty]

you are welcome.

[h d e rushin]

your poetry always hurtle my inspiration.....good write,, dana

Thank you dear one :)

[Bertie]

What an extraordinary read...I went back and read it twice more so I could really appreciate the lyrical journey you've created here...One of the things that really struck me when reading it was the sparsity of punctuation, some may consider this a fault, but I think it only adds to the flow and the feeling of movement and development, it really makes it feel like a song that builds and builds and builds...You've created particularly sensual sounds with this poem, the simple words come easily out the mouth and it's a pleasure to read...I personally am not sure about the last two lines... Merely as you've written a poem that explores how extraordinary it is, the feeling of love: how it inspires us, how we feel as though we are flying even though we're not...I would have kept to the metaphor and not given the image of an angel as this has so many connotations for people that I think would overshadow a lot of the beautiful stuff you've written before...But this is only a personal opinion and I reiterate that this is a fantastic poem ! :) x

Thank you sweet Bertie, for all your thoughts, and insights, on my writing, I'm glad you came by, and enjoyed! ~Eli