~ Эйфория

~~ A dance with all it needs... ~~

~ Эйфория

 

 

Shine, shine little star

Among our universe

Let us dance into the light

Of our perfect, amalgamation

Elegant footsteps over the wooden floor

Let the dance of tomorrow never

Be as rich like this one ever again

It comes, with the glance of your

Leading hue, within the drama

Your face enlightens, I’m the

Desert in your sunshine, the petal

To be green, and minty after all the thirst

Into the light as darker days droned

Take me with your embrace

Of the perfect and rich swan neck with a

Long curl, touching the lips

Of your love in shiny pecked prickles

Let us be forever swans,

Dark haired, with white hearts

Love felt underneath high pressure

Never again so much enlightened

 

 

~ Лиза Лаура

Author's Note

Эйфория means Euphoria,
My initials on the end, are as I use them always
In Russian, my name Elisa, is only known as Liza,
There is no E, for it, otherwise it would be awkward...

Thank you so much for reading just a glammerous one of me,
A little over-done, but that's the passion of Europe, now and then...
Ballet and Romance, within the drama of life....
Thank you xx

Reviews

[Belle]

First, photo as well as font's hue is my favorite.
Second, I always love poem presented in an enjambment style, with this I find poetic persona's voice in a calm tone which I like.
I just don't appreciate how the dancing evolve with the time, but in the bible, it is being said that the purest form of expressing intense elation and/or joy (euphoria)is by drinking wine and by dancing. I would like to keep the purpose of dancing like the old way, thank you for the chosen title and for the notes Dear Eli. They reminded me of those old thoughts. Especially that you speak about it in relation to culture (in Europe it is Passion ). I love cultural dance. One simple dance can speak a lot about beliefs and ways of life of an ethnic group.

About your name, I think I understand it. Language varies in term of sound segment.
It has something to do with phonetics and phonology which we can study in Linguistics.

So sweet and wise dear Sister, how I could expect different from you, you're the brain on WC, I love this. You're right in your questions.... for me when I dance, as I was an old dancer, in my younger years, it was just that release I didn't thought of anything else, let myself fully go, and almost flied.... sometimes I miss those years... and I feel year-sick if that is a proper English term, like homesick.... I wish I could go back in time now and then and re- live my youth and do it 1000 times more and better.... I thank you for your insights on this review, really, they mean the world to me. From you I learn. I feel honored you liked my explanation. You're so right, In Italy they call me Eli, here on WC nobody understands as it is seen as a "MALE name" and they prefer the English Ellie :) but Eli is pronounced like Amy, in English, European way, it is funny how all is phoneticly influenced and so on... I feel you there sis. Big hugs, and lovely to ramble with ya! x

[Belle]

"I didn't thought of anything else, let myself fully go, and almost flied"
Definitely, expression with purity. Flying, soaring with the intense elation.
I sigh with these words...Eli : I like how my mind pronounce your name every time I type it.

Ah yes.... that is purity.... thank you my soul! Love you for that sis, you're the most brilliant one on here! x

[Pax]

Love the interpretation dear Belle, I could agree more with dearest Eli and to you too...you both are brilliant i say...
I didn't know about the name for i prefer to call you dearest for your ever sweetness light.. that's how i see it...i didn't know about others but that's you to me my friend... you could still dance dearest.... its the highest form of emotional release i guess... feel the grace of release in your dance... along with a good music... hugs to both... sorry to intrude here.. :)

Hehe, dearest is most welcome dear Pax, as you know you're mine too! my sweet friend. We have such a good level, and friendship all together, it makes me move daily.... :) You're such a sweetheart PAX thank you X

[Belle]

This is a reunion. Nice! :)

It is :D it is lovely! X

[Pax]

oh, love reunion... it warm and lively, :D
quite nice... dear belle is not busy....
feel free to breathe in WC dear one as well as you dearest *big smiles*

Big smiles here too, while I should sleep a long time ago X haha... I will catch up on sleep later, friends are all to me X

[Pax]

haha... oh my... sorry to disturb your slumber dearest... well let make time to celebrate, cheers ...

Paxie you desturb? he??? let me tell you: " N E V E R " you have the right to call me out of bed even.... ;D only you ! ok :P Cheers hun! X

[Belle]

You too are both funny!
Pax, shhhhhh! Let her sleep... :)

Hey lovely LOL I'm awake as a hooligan :D x love you both ♥

[Pax]

shhh... * whisper* lovely dearest is taking a nap... lets give a tranquil lullaby for her to rest well... party will be back on after that.. ;)

Haha.... still awake loves... :) love you though, I will go off now ok? we will party tomorrow yay! can't wait :D xoxoxoxoxo

[Michael G.]

Lovely, with precise beauty of a ballet in words and thoughts. Well done.
A privilege to read.

Thank you so much Michael

[Mark]

Wonderful, light, and graceful. Your metaphors made me smile. :)

Thank you very much Mark :)

[Corset]

I love it when romance is slightly overdone, when your poems make me sway with a smile on my face, imagining a beautiful dance between lovers. Gorgeous!

Thank you so much lovely! xx

[Corset]

Back again for this one Ellie, Interesting I didn't catch the Russian reference in this the first time, that seems to be a running theme, strange things afoot, lol, pointy toes ballerina style, tip toeing through the tulips. Beautiful beautiful can I still call you Ellie though?

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Another breathtaking piece!...I have tried to pick my favorite verse, but can't pick one, because all speak to my heart... I love this as a whole!...Truly DIVINE Sis!
Exquisite write!

"Desert in your sunshine, the petal

To be green, and minty after all the thirst

Into the light as darker days droned

Take me with your embrace

Of the perfect and rich swan neck with a

Long curl, touching the lips

Of your love in shiny pecked prickles

Let us be forever swans,

Dark haired, with white hearts

Love felt underneath high pressure"~Fabulous!

Thank you so much dear, I wanted to write another about the love i have for dancing, and dancers, so glad you liked it xxx

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Such a graceful dance this is!...lovely write, truly vivid in my mind. ~xo~ :)

Makes me smile .... :) xo

[Wakeofahero]

I liked this, nicely done

Thank you very much dear poet

[Ed Hart]

you are the mistress of dancing words

Thanks Ed :)

[Tree]

"Let us forever be swans ..." I liked that line. Terrific poem that reminded me of something I recently read about a group of groundbreaking native american ballet dancers, who appeared on the ballet scene in the 40's and 50's. Apparently they were inspired by a Russian ballet troup that performed near their Oklahoma Indian reservation when they were children. The story was inspiring. I'll leave you a link to a short video if you are interested in learning about it...

http://ndepth.newsok.com/five-indian-ballerinas

Oog thank you very much sweet poet, I shall look that up tomorrow for sure, so curious, ballet indeed has a Russian history, lovely words thanks a bunch, Eli

I ment oooh... Writing from my phone oops

[Kenaz]

"Let the dance of tomorrow never
Be as rich like this one ever again" ah, there is no day like the one we live in, and may the stars be brighter than they were yesterday. You've also reminded me to post another poem haha. Thank you for this, keep posting more for me to read!

Aye, I will.... :)