~ Blue Mountain

~ My love, light, and strength... my "Blue Mountain"

~ Blue Mountain

 

You are one of a kind, my blue mountain,

I have thoroughly studied every relief of yours

The perfect skin, with your red blood

Pumped passion through your cheeks,

To give me the perfect undertone for

Blue into some purple reliefs and visions

In each cliff of yours I find a history,

As in every wrinkle, I see the light

I was in there, many times, stucked

And hidden in your kingdom to reach the sun,

As your oxygen always saves my being

You are my pride and my splendor to hold

No white canvas, but highly colored

With the reflection of your sea maiden

In navy colored hue, where I make a dive

And let your eyes closed until I’m finished

Your smile, is like the sleeping moon

Your eyelashes closed, peaceful like sparkling

Comets, even your lips, are the gate

In our universe, where you can open them

To other realms of amor, surreal and delightful

You’re the King of blues, as my name

Only sinks within your presence, but

I love to, give myself fully over in your

Bed of love, with the sky reflected on

Your so peaceful and elegant skin.

Where I’m love drowned and lost within

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

This turns the blue I sometimes feel into something blue-tiful. :D

Lame pun I know, but this work, with its descriptions of color, comets and mountains all wrapped into a tight package of something (erotic/lovely), is pure passionate, pure beauty. Thank you for this.

Haha you made me laugh, thanks my friend for your beautiful review

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

WRITTEN WITH SUCH SPLENDOR AND CARE FOR EACH WORD GIVING LIFE TO THE LOVE YOU HAVE FOR THE ONE IN WICH YOU SPEAK. WONDERFUL AND PERFECT AS ALWAYS MY DEAR!  MUCH LOVE YOUR WAY .

Thank you so much sweet soul sis xx

[Art Sun]

so many phrases that can take one into a variety of visions and senses...the blueness of it all combined with the majestic form of Nature...just blends within the touch of love...truly nice escape Elisa...

Thank you very very much

[Art Sun]

my pleasure...

[Androglossia]

The poems shows a lot of emotions and appreciation. As usual, your linguistic style is very captivating and great use of metaphor too. You're good at using the free verse form, I noticed. And though your choice of words is simple, it easily conveys emotion. I like the accompanying photo too. Well done, my friend.

Thank you a lot sweet Maryanne. This was another for my love...
As I'm a free person, in general, it maybe shows up also through many
of my writes, I agree. Thank you for your support, and review, truly appreciated. Eli ~

[Androglossia]

You're very welcome!

Smiles to the Philippines x

[Androglossia]

O thank you E.L.

Selamat from Indonesia (within me) you're welcome

[Androglossia]

Is selamat an Indonesian equivalent of thank you?

it means good, like selamat makan means "good or happy dinner" thank you in Indonesian means "Terima Kasih" cium is a kiss :)

[Androglossia]

Wow, how did you come to know all that? I was curious becuase Salamat is the Filipino for Thank you. I thought Selamat is thank you as well:) You are amazing..

I'm half Indonesian, and some Mollucan blood :) (my mom is from there) (Java Island) yes, there are some coincidences in between our languages... funny.