~ Blue Mountain

~ My love, light, and strength... my "Blue Mountain"

~ Blue Mountain

 

You are one of a kind, my blue mountain,

I have thoroughly studied every relief of yours

The perfect skin, with your red blood

Pumped passion through your cheeks,

To give me the perfect undertone for

Blue into some purple reliefs and visions

In each cliff of yours I find a history,

As in every wrinkle, I see the light

I was in there, many times, stucked

And hidden in your kingdom to reach the sun,

As your oxygen always saves my being

You are my pride and my splendor to hold

No white canvas, but highly colored

With the reflection of your sea maiden

In navy colored hue, where I make a dive

And let your eyes closed until I’m finished

Your smile, is like the sleeping moon

Your eyelashes closed, peaceful like sparkling

Comets, even your lips, are the gate

In our universe, where you can open them

To other realms of amor, surreal and delightful

You’re the King of blues, as my name

Only sinks within your presence, but

I love to, give myself fully over in your

Bed of love, with the sky reflected on

Your so peaceful and elegant skin.

Where I’m love drowned and lost within

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

This turns the blue I sometimes feel into something blue-tiful. :D

Lame pun I know, but this work, with its descriptions of color, comets and mountains all wrapped into a tight package of something (erotic/lovely), is pure passionate, pure beauty. Thank you for this.

Haha you made me laugh, thanks my friend for your beautiful review

[Rhianne Ney]

I love the picture the font and the great writing style.

Keep writing (:

Thank you so very much Rhianne, older piece of me, so glad you read through also these writes... - Elisa

[Rhianne Ney]

I found it and I never regretted reading this, I even shared it on FB extra regards for your piece

[Constance L. Hartwell]

What a beautifully written poem. The imagery was so real and absolute.

Thank you very much Constance, your meaning means much to me!

[Brielle Cartny]

Very different and when i review i look for things like this. So descriptive. Colour is bursting through my mind when i read this.

Thank you very much Brielle, a mix of surreal, with metaphor for my love :)

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"In a navy colored hue,where I make a dive and let your eyes close until I am finished" was probably my favorite line. Your imagery and metaphors are so beautifully placed together against the mood of this masterpiece . Amazing write,Elisa :)))

Thank you so much Cord, always

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i love how your love, metaphor, and the picture all work so well together...

excellent work :)

Thank you very much :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I love getting lost in the blue... (what a fabulous muse you have Sis)....to feel the love of your surroundings and have this much passion woven into your words, truly defines Romance! Such a Gorgeous write!

"You are my pride and my splendor to hold

No white canvas, but highly colored

With the reflection of your sea maiden

In navy colored hue, where I make a dive

And let your eyes closed until I’m finished

Your smile, is like the sleeping moon

Your eyelashes closed, peaceful like sparkling

Comets, even your lips, are the gate

In our universe, where you can open them

To other realms of amor, surreal and delightful"~ This is Perfection... (sigh)

Thank you so much sweet sis, so good and nice you liked it, beautiful words love thank you xxx

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I loved it...it's beautiful! ~xo~
I have gotten my fix..Yay! :)

Yay :))) so happy, I'm not at home right now, we chat soon sis thank you so much for all dear xx

[Austin Davis]

You command a coalition between the English language and imagery.. I want to be your blue mountain, so you can speak to me this way.

-a random stranger

Thank you

[Blue Ivory]

Amazing! Simply amazing! The depth, the beauty, it's just perfect...And on reading this, I felt lots of things to praise to about, but right now I just don't have the words to describe them. But I love it and I am keeping it in my favorites!

Thank you so much for your heartfelt review, much appreciated dear

[Pax]

this shows how romantic you are my friend. this is art of romance filled with rich emotional life. Amazing!

Thank you Willyam, for seeing all.