~ O' Mar

~ One of my recurring visions, I have since I was a girl of 16, and one who always follows me.

~ O' Mar

 

 

 

It happened again, I wandered back

On my Portuguese coast, where I

Every two months have a richly

Returning vision as I walk

In my white cotton robe

Which hits the seabed

And where the shells kiss my feet

 

This time you ran there again,

With your white linen trousers, and your bare

Upper body, again your face was not visible

Your presence always as highly with your

Telepathic hugs, the distance became shorter

Of time, and slow motion, all running towards me

 

The ever eternal recurring dream

Your wonderful blank face,

But the love around your corpo

That speaks volumes, and hits me

To the depths of my soul.

 

The mystery has never consummated

Higher volts, and can’t be disclosed

By coating only dreams

How gold and sweet they can be,

Reality is a waterway of the future

 

And with lost days and romantic visions

I often turn back, like it embraces me

When the mind is finally rested, it searches me,

Because I saw that man, with his

Headless body glisten in imagination,

And he saw me…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

~ This is a write about a rich vision, and mystery I have since I was 16, and it always turns back on me once or twice within two months.... It is never solved... it has a huge elusive meaning to me. (It is also the second write on this vision I wrote).

The music is of one of my favorite Fado singers, in duet originally... as the ancient song always haunts the vision I have. Just if you have the need, click on the music add... ; )



Thank you xx

Reviews

[emmajoy]

We dream what the mind nudges but not always what the heart needs. Time ticks back and forth in dreams, and, we sleepers and dreamers try to chase it - sometimes it stays still long enough for us to see right through and understand, But other times it swings like a jewel on a golden chain, teasing.. taunting .. like your headless man .. the one waiting for a title, a name, eyes with which to gaze into yours.

Your writing varies in theme so often, you have such vibrant imagination .. tis all powerful in its own way, hard to say, thank you and instantly leave!

Beautifully expressed dearest x thank you for your words... P.s.mailed you hugs x

[hundi]

you write very well and always provoke imagery you cant ignore, well done

Thank you very much Hundi

[Renée]

I have been waiting for you to publish this one ... reoccurring dreams are so unearthly amazing .. perhaps you headless wonder stands beside you ( ;

Who knows... I am an openminded spirit. Aw, thank you so much... dear, Tonight the vision came back again LOL.... it happens each time... so good you remember this one ; ) xx

[Renée]

humm...you know...I live near the beach..I could help you out by taking some photos and sending them? giggle

Haha that would be great, hope those man have no head, and linnen white pants on.... ; ) and open torso's!!! :D:D

[Renée]

umm well more surfer types with heads and no linen pants..but the torso's i think you would find acceptable lol

Ha! ok.... now I'm curious anyway ;) *(my old soul, is seeing those damn white linnen pants all over the vision each time*)... maybe it's Ro, surfing overthere... and just under that pants, he has a modern "swimming thingy at how it's called..." lol

[Androglossia]

This is a very personal write as I found it a mixture of your reality and your dream. It sounds like an outcome of your conscious and subconscious resulting a beautiful work of art:) When we dream, we dream about things that we have to deal with or what we are thinking about or wanted to have. I think our dreams give attention to these things. So I guess the man in your dream is the man you longed to be with. Thank you for yet again a very good write:)

Thank you Maryanne, for your thoughts, and wonderful words.

[Kenaz]

Dreams, the great unsolved mystery. A wonder to who brought you the vision, and what purpose. Perhaps to make you question, too keep dreaming. Maybe the answer will come to you in time.

Who knows... thank you Kenaz :)

[sharonlee]

Exquiste detail!

Thank you dear one! xo

[Pax]

intriguing work my friend...filled with rich emotions of the past...leaves us in wonders of the time and remember those moments once or twice in each passing day...
great work!

Thank you so much, Willyam..

[Kenneth The Poet]

Such a vision, so surreal.

Thank you Kenneth :)

[FJ Davis]

Am I the only reviewer who thinks that a dream will probably never be properly or fully interpreted by the conscious mind?--that it is primarily the province of the subconscious.
While the subconscious certainly has a powerful effect on the conscious mind--and, therefore, on one's entire life--this quirky intelligence typically works through strong compulsion, inexplicable hunches and sudden whim.
Dreams appear to be deep inner-talk; using symbols the conscious mind rarely remembers--and if it does--frequently only pretends to understand.
I suppose what I'm saying, is that communication has been--and is being--made; the results of that mysterious dialogue will eventually manifest itself through the "informed" individual's following of some curious inner urging--at the right time and in the right place.
One has but to live until that "revelation"--and not, in the meantime--confuse one's self with merry-go-round speculation.
A lovely, starkly-imaged and, obviously, thought-provoking bit of work, Elisa.

A very very clever insight dear sir, I'm soooo glad you came by! I feel within you a rationalist, vs. science knower. (as I am mostly too) but some of my high sensitivity, (HSP) personality obviously since I'm born, plays with me, in all kind of matters... I had a difficult time to be boss of it, but I am now, (at least to not be scared with an rational mind of irrational experiences). I thank you for your honest visions, meaning, and review. Merry-go-round speculations are for some impossible to feel and to understand, because they themselves have not experienced something likewise before, what went beyond reality, though not less not inconceivable. Men has to be careful with the rational vs. the gifted, I'm standing in between. And will explain you more in private, some day. Frank you're a gifted soul, and I'm grateful to have you by. ~ Elisa