~ Her Labyrinth

~ A poem about youth, examples in your life, expressions, observations, clear visions, love for art, and love for photography.

~ Her Labyrinth

 

Days lasted long as a child

Outside playing without any sense of time

But lasted indefinitely in the mind

Of the child with the labyrinth

She was particular in the lost days

 

Her world was infinite,

She saw, some people dancing

In her mind, and rich colors

Visions, of loved ones, and

The most adventurous stories

 

She fantasized often while playing

Where another asked where she was

She crawled in mind and on her face

You could see that she was happy.

Sunk in another time

 

Her thoughts were like a spinning top

They made circles in all directions

A vision for the future wrapped

Like multiple different ways

Where light could be found

 

She stood and looked rather,

Observed the happy crowd

Feeling clear what would happen

And painted it on canvas later

From her unpacked photographic memory

 

She was a special child

One that was observed by me,

I see her sometimes still and smile,

Then she smiles back, and helps me paint.

When I lost it for a while

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Shandra Sun]

Dear laura Elisa
You must be a wonderful person. I can feel the sweetness of your soul throughout your poems. I love this one particulary.It seems you know me as the inner child still very alive and asking all kinds of questions to life.
You use the words in a magic way. I can feel the images behind and see the colour of your emotions. Love it. Thank you.
Chandra Sun

Thank you so much Sandra, for your beautiful words, thoughts, and review, truly appreciate your support, and points of view. You're welcome

[Shandra Sun]

I just realize I wrote your name in a wrong way. I'm so sorry .

Not any problem at all my friend thank you again for your wonderful words

[quinfinn]

beautifully written and full of retrospective imagery, ah yes, that once upon a once upon a time and then ..............................................................fast forward

*smiling* thank you quinfinn!

[quinfinn]

a pleasure to read and rewind

[gombeggar]

ahh, to be young when the universe was simple and perfect and everything was just what u percieved and nothing else mattered...good work...nice picture to go along with this as well...cuggestion maybe it should read in 2nd to last line 'Then she smiles back, and helpS me paint' or the other way around

Thank you very much for helping me out with the grammar, and thank you for your words, truly appreciated.