I can`t really express how I feel when I read your wonderful poem! I cry and feel happy in my heart, thank yuo so much, dearest Eli for all your sweet words and your strong believe in me! You are so close to me! Hug...(I m happy and cant believe!:)
~ nia
Hehe I have to say with out the golden I would have thought the leaves where dying Hehe HER heart was dying but you described it beautifuly.she's special and unique,and no one is... Hope this has deeper meaning :) all and all what a gorgeous piece for your indian friend :) you have real gentle loving Heart Elisa :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you again, this Poem is to a best friend... her review you can read in top here. She is Bulgar.. read moreThank you again, this Poem is to a best friend... her review you can read in top here. She is Bulgarian, though... ;) but so sweet your words. Many thanks!!
What a lovely treat and tribute to a beloved friend. You have been gifted with wisdom to choose the real gem. I hope she's also a poet and writer here. I would like to read her pieces...
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you lovely one, your warm heart makes my night, truly xxxxx can't thank you enouhg Nia is one .. read moreThank you lovely one, your warm heart makes my night, truly xxxxx can't thank you enouhg Nia is one of the (I think best writers on here) from Europe.... here is her page: http://www.writerscafe.org/bluesea and she is also here the "futured review" xxxx I will be back soon for you darling friend. x
All i can say is this is pure beauty.. You have taken the words and brought them to a whole new level...
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
This one I've written for my dearest Sis, and friend Sugar Plum♥ a.k.a. Nia(Nina) Nour here on WC... read moreThis one I've written for my dearest Sis, and friend Sugar Plum♥ a.k.a. Nia(Nina) Nour here on WC. She is a big inspiration in my life, and a friend in real life. :) xx thank you also Nia would appreciate this. :)))
11 Years Ago
It was a beautifully written peace for someone very special
Beautiful poem about friendship. In your third line "as she smiles, she embrace the world", you might want to change embrace to embraces. That is unless you intended something different.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thank you Kenaz, for your beautiful words, and help. Elisa
I really love the beautiful image you bought to me, friendship is always so treasurable,
because friends can be the one we depend on all the time! :D
After reading the poem, I felt myself touched as well! Wonderful Write! :))
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thanks so much CM. I appreciate your review, this one is for one of my bests! Nia, or Nina Nour, won.. read moreThanks so much CM. I appreciate your review, this one is for one of my bests! Nia, or Nina Nour, wonderful poetess, of light and love, also here... on the cafe!
12 Years Ago
'CM", haha, I like this xd~ I see I see,and I believe she must be very very special to you :))
12 Years Ago
:) you're the best, thank you so much Hong Kong, love your reviews! xo
12 Years Ago
Ur always welcome :) And I love your work!
12 Years Ago
You're too kind :) xoxo to HK! love your indipendant city!
You started out with an absolutely stunning image "Her heart is as golden leaves on white trees
Twinkling in the late night sunset"! This is a lovely and heartfelt tribute you your friend. The language is so magical and even though I do not know her, I feel you have given a beautiful picture of her heart.