~ Aurora Borealis

~ Northern Light

~ Aurora Borealis

 

Under the arch of a starry sky

With a temperature well below zero

I touched your soul with my warm hands

Like an round aura, you reflected the universe

Of our love...

 

A labyrinth of roads that lead

In stardust, your thoughts whirl as

Small particles, and with pure reflection

My Aurora Borealis you're so beautiful, robust

And longing…

 

I take you into my warm cabin

Where we drink hot chocolate

The icicles are in your unshaven beard

I find you charming with your red hands

I'll warm you up…

 

The cold wind makes cracking our wooden hut

And along the windows shrilled the sound

In contrast with our warm fireplace

The crackling of the wood is divine

I look at you…

 

My Aurora Borealis, you are so handsome

With your thick winter coat still on,

As purple and green sparks reach our

Living room, where your dark hair glistens

I kiss you…

 

It will never be really dark

In days of love, where light shines

And see your reflection sparkle

Where I could rest by your presence

I am with you…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you...
xx

Reviews

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

Wow...Just, wow!!!

The music and video actually really works well for it!! It is bold, and beautiful. It seems like it would be wrong to compare this to your other work, which is so varied, but honestly I think it feels like a new height!! There must be much in you I don't know, for this to be able to flow out so seemingly without excessive effort!!

It seems petty to have any real criticism, but I was ironically just comparing the words arch and arc and realizing what the difference was, and I might have used the word arc instead of arch in your first line, but it is quite possible you meant either...Just my own initial take.

The warmth of the first stanza comes through immediately and I can easily feel it, putting my poor poem to shame! That round aura is indeed what I feel!

Those labyrinthine roads, you pulled straight out of my mind...The narrow dirt roads I took to see the Northern Lights, my first time. It feels like you are discussing my own memories.

This is a love poem in which I cannot help but find myself. Hot cocoa and the warmth of your cabin, your hands around mine, the firelight. Your description of the wind willing to crack the cabin like a nut, but the calm of the inside is radiant description...Fantastic. "In days of love" you bring reflection new meaning...a meaning all your own. One to melt this wicked heart!

Such a beautiful review my friend, thank you with whole my heart, for your effort, time, and all you've put in here. It was a special poem for me, and it will remain. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. There is something truly magical by this light... :) So glad you see it as a new hight, it's almost two years old, on here, but I've written it way back in the days. Thank you, for all. :)

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

This is two years old?!

Yeah, almost, see the date in the right above, when the poem is posted, plus I've written it earlier... ;-)

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

I need to delve deep into your catalog!! You clearly have been at this a lot longer than I have...at least in terms of posting things. I have been held back by being so private about my work. I took a long time to come to the opinion that whatever the consequence I needed to share with others...

Oh I've been the same for years too.... Until a South African friend told me to post my talent here... Sigh, didn't believed at all in my scribbles lol...and now I'm struck... Thank you sweet friend, there is to find many, you'll even never thought of I could write that... ;-)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Oh this is beautiful, I wish to see Aurora with my eyes...but I could through our poem now! I like the way you describe it as a real creature, your words are shining with love...Magical color.
♥ nia

Thank you so much, for your support, and love sweetest friend x

[Cherrie Palmer]

Whither this is a lost love that no longer walks amongst us or the lover you hold close you did a masterful job giving warmth to the light that is only seen there in the cold.

Thank you for your beautiful thoughts... and review, I appreciate the two ways you have in mind. :)

[emmajoy]

'I find you charming in your red hands .. I'll warm you up ..' for some reason those are the words i find most real.

There are some happenings Man can mimic, manufacture, contol, but the Aurora Borealis comes from the place where miracles were birthed. When you find a being that makes you feel same way - then - then- then he must be heaven sent!

Meantime, I'll keep looking up!

Thank you dear for your review and thoughts xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I love the metaphoric references to describe such a shining love... so cleaver and stunning.

Thank you dearwonderfulmaledale :D:D I am so glad you like it. :) smiles across the miles :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i love aurora borealises- i've been fascinated with them ever since i've learned about them

in my mind, i can imagine so many myths and stories behind these beautiful sights

it is certainly wonderful- and a GREAT compliment- to be compared to a natural phenomenon like this! wonderful, unique work. xx

Oh Cascara, glad you liked it, and thank you so much for your wonderful words, all true... I'm fond of this too... always dreamed higher on the northern light, and saw visions of truth. Thank you so much for stopping a second in my library! :) xx

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)]

you're very welcome! :)

*Smiling* :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)]

XD

[Sheila Kline]

'Tis truly one of the most majestic sights I have ever seen - only one time they were seen as far south as the state of South Carolina and I shall never forget them! Your words of love are filled with romance and the manner in which you have compared love, and caring to the beauty of such a magnificent part of creation is truly inspiring and touching!
One of my favorites from you....going in my favorite file....yes, oh yes!!

Thank you so much love, it was a real heartfelt one..... so glad you liked it xx

[Belle]

Aha, the naive part of me appeared,
like I still have to google before dropping by
this words of mine,
for I tell ye Dear Eli
this is my first time
to be acquainted with this kind
of light display in the sky

Thank you for introducing this to me
And like the Aurora Borealis
your words penned in here
brought magic in my recesses.

Thank you so much dear Belle, friend and poetess, that doesn't matter at all, I can understand in your southern world, this is not usual... (from my Indonesian roots, I would never think of it too) but it is beautiful, if you ever saw... many thank yous, hugs, and love, Eli xx

[Distant horizons]

It can never be really dark in days of love.....Perfect.

Thank you sir Lorry xx

[Distant horizons]

:-)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

So Romantic!...I found the "Aurora Borealis" to be mysterious and magical...truly enchanting. This is a gorgeous write!

"A labyrinth of roads that lead

In stardust, your thoughts whirl as

Small particles, and with pure reflection

My Aurora Borealis you're so beautiful, robust

And longing…~"Star crossed lovers"...(sigh)

Yes, thanks sis! for feeling that one! it's so true... you're lovely! great review, happy to have you always around! x

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's a pleasure... This is a treasure to read!~xo~ :)

♥ and :))) and X

[Robbie~xoxo~]

LOL cute heart, Sis! Have a great evening. :)

Thank you sissy, you too! sleeping time soon here, :) under the sky :D xx