~ Aurora Borealis

~ Northern Light

~ Aurora Borealis

 

Under the arch of a starry sky

With a temperature well below zero

I touched your soul with my warm hands

Like an round aura, you reflected the universe

Of our love...

 

A labyrinth of roads that lead

In stardust, your thoughts whirl as

Small particles, and with pure reflection

My Aurora Borealis you're so beautiful, robust

And longing…

 

I take you into my warm cabin

Where we drink hot chocolate

The icicles are in your unshaven beard

I find you charming with your red hands

I'll warm you up…

 

The cold wind makes cracking our wooden hut

And along the windows shrilled the sound

In contrast with our warm fireplace

The crackling of the wood is divine

I look at you…

 

My Aurora Borealis, you are so handsome

With your thick winter coat still on,

As purple and green sparks reach our

Living room, where your dark hair glistens

I kiss you…

 

It will never be really dark

In days of love, where light shines

And see your reflection sparkle

Where I could rest by your presence

I am with you…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you...
xx

Reviews

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

Wow...Just, wow!!!

The music and video actually really works well for it!! It is bold, and beautiful. It seems like it would be wrong to compare this to your other work, which is so varied, but honestly I think it feels like a new height!! There must be much in you I don't know, for this to be able to flow out so seemingly without excessive effort!!

It seems petty to have any real criticism, but I was ironically just comparing the words arch and arc and realizing what the difference was, and I might have used the word arc instead of arch in your first line, but it is quite possible you meant either...Just my own initial take.

The warmth of the first stanza comes through immediately and I can easily feel it, putting my poor poem to shame! That round aura is indeed what I feel!

Those labyrinthine roads, you pulled straight out of my mind...The narrow dirt roads I took to see the Northern Lights, my first time. It feels like you are discussing my own memories.

This is a love poem in which I cannot help but find myself. Hot cocoa and the warmth of your cabin, your hands around mine, the firelight. Your description of the wind willing to crack the cabin like a nut, but the calm of the inside is radiant description...Fantastic. "In days of love" you bring reflection new meaning...a meaning all your own. One to melt this wicked heart!

Such a beautiful review my friend, thank you with whole my heart, for your effort, time, and all you've put in here. It was a special poem for me, and it will remain. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. There is something truly magical by this light... :) So glad you see it as a new hight, it's almost two years old, on here, but I've written it way back in the days. Thank you, for all. :)

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

This is two years old?!

Yeah, almost, see the date in the right above, when the poem is posted, plus I've written it earlier... ;-)

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

I need to delve deep into your catalog!! You clearly have been at this a lot longer than I have...at least in terms of posting things. I have been held back by being so private about my work. I took a long time to come to the opinion that whatever the consequence I needed to share with others...

Oh I've been the same for years too.... Until a South African friend told me to post my talent here... Sigh, didn't believed at all in my scribbles lol...and now I'm struck... Thank you sweet friend, there is to find many, you'll even never thought of I could write that... ;-)

[Pax]

very romantic as always my dear friend... It show so much love and passion to the mystery person/someone/something in the poem...

wonderful write.

Thank you dear, hihi not always.... well I can be a b***h too.... some know... ;) But thank you very much love your review!

[sierrasparks91]

very mysterious and yet so powerful it is beautiful

Yes, it is... it is a metaphor for dark days, and light of love. Thank you Sierra :)

[sierrasparks91]

your very welcomed

[quinfinn]

lovely imagery and an easy read...well written

Thanks Quinny :)

[quinfinn]

;)

[Sky]

My favorite line, "In stardust, your thoughts whirl as
Small particles, and with pure reflection" Nice poem, thanks for sharing.

Thank you so much Sky, :)

[Sami Khalil]

A dazzling work of art like the magic lights of Aurora Borealis...The words , the light, the music all flow harmoniously to create an an Imax experience that you feel like you are under the canopy of heaven dancing with the lights... Good imagination and artistic talent from the sparkle of a poetess...

Thank you very much Sami for reading my Northern Light, thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are quite welcome...

Smiles!

[Sami Khalil]

Smiling back and waving from across the ocean...

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Dear Ms. Elisa, This is extremely Romantic filled with dazzling imagery and ambiguity. I also love the sensory details you paint in this awesome picture from "I find you charming with your red hands" to "The crackling of the wood is divine" because it makes the reader actually feel like they are there. Well done-as always - Ms.Elisa.

Cord :)

Thank you so much dear Cord always nice to read your beautiful reviews :)

[Cynthia Man]

A loving piece! Such beautiful image, it's emotional, and romantic! Sweet writing! I really love this one, totally adding it to my library xd It gives me this magical feeling that it makes me smile while reading it! Amazing write! :D

Thanks dear, so great you loved it, it was meant to spread some love, and light across the globe.... as days can be very depressive for some... amazing words, thank you so much! for all....

[Cynthia Man]

Yeah, sometimes life can be harsh, thats why people love writing, it makes us feel better when we are at the lowest point of life~ And you make me feel much better !~ :D

So glad I did, dear poet, Yes, sometimes people really are at that point....
I'm pro-positivism, and always have my head up. Just love to bring some love and light for those, who need it. xx

[Cynthia Man]

This writing will definitely help! I'd been into those hard times before, and well, guess all we need is a little bit of love!~:D

Exactly.... You know how it works Hong Kong x

[Star Shaped Heart]

I'm gasping for air as my heart beats, I breathe deep and am enhanced in all of my senses, yes I am amplified to a place with my very own Aurora Borealis is laughing with me in the reflection of our perfected love UNITED

Thank you very much x

[Star Shaped Heart]

You're welcome x

[Sirius King]

i like the flow and imagery of this, it feels warm, romantic, and magical

I take you into my warm cabin

Where we drink hot chocolate

The icicles are in your unshaven beard

I find you charming with your red hands

I'll warm you up…

...very nice

Thank you for picking the specialty out... :D and lovely you came by!
Elisa

[Alex]

This is superb!!!!! really lovely, always found the lights fascinating and romantic, well done really captured my imagination!

Thank you very much Alex, glad you liked it :) Elisa

[Alex]

No worries :D