~ Aurora Borealis

~ Northern Light

~ Aurora Borealis

 

Under the arch of a starry sky

With a temperature well below zero

I touched your soul with my warm hands

Like an round aura, you reflected the universe

Of our love...

 

A labyrinth of roads that lead

In stardust, your thoughts whirl as

Small particles, and with pure reflection

My Aurora Borealis you're so beautiful, robust

And longing…

 

I take you into my warm cabin

Where we drink hot chocolate

The icicles are in your unshaven beard

I find you charming with your red hands

I'll warm you up…

 

The cold wind makes cracking our wooden hut

And along the windows shrilled the sound

In contrast with our warm fireplace

The crackling of the wood is divine

I look at you…

 

My Aurora Borealis, you are so handsome

With your thick winter coat still on,

As purple and green sparks reach our

Living room, where your dark hair glistens

I kiss you…

 

It will never be really dark

In days of love, where light shines

And see your reflection sparkle

Where I could rest by your presence

I am with you…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you...
xx

Reviews

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

Wow...Just, wow!!!

The music and video actually really works well for it!! It is bold, and beautiful. It seems like it would be wrong to compare this to your other work, which is so varied, but honestly I think it feels like a new height!! There must be much in you I don't know, for this to be able to flow out so seemingly without excessive effort!!

It seems petty to have any real criticism, but I was ironically just comparing the words arch and arc and realizing what the difference was, and I might have used the word arc instead of arch in your first line, but it is quite possible you meant either...Just my own initial take.

The warmth of the first stanza comes through immediately and I can easily feel it, putting my poor poem to shame! That round aura is indeed what I feel!

Those labyrinthine roads, you pulled straight out of my mind...The narrow dirt roads I took to see the Northern Lights, my first time. It feels like you are discussing my own memories.

This is a love poem in which I cannot help but find myself. Hot cocoa and the warmth of your cabin, your hands around mine, the firelight. Your description of the wind willing to crack the cabin like a nut, but the calm of the inside is radiant description...Fantastic. "In days of love" you bring reflection new meaning...a meaning all your own. One to melt this wicked heart!

Such a beautiful review my friend, thank you with whole my heart, for your effort, time, and all you've put in here. It was a special poem for me, and it will remain. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. There is something truly magical by this light... :) So glad you see it as a new hight, it's almost two years old, on here, but I've written it way back in the days. Thank you, for all. :)

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

This is two years old?!

Yeah, almost, see the date in the right above, when the poem is posted, plus I've written it earlier... ;-)

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

I need to delve deep into your catalog!! You clearly have been at this a lot longer than I have...at least in terms of posting things. I have been held back by being so private about my work. I took a long time to come to the opinion that whatever the consequence I needed to share with others...

Oh I've been the same for years too.... Until a South African friend told me to post my talent here... Sigh, didn't believed at all in my scribbles lol...and now I'm struck... Thank you sweet friend, there is to find many, you'll even never thought of I could write that... ;-)

[Thaddius]

When the music came on this melted my inner Odysseus. There's a pulse of antiquity that's so unapologetic in your work. You channel the soul of a goddess, dare to speak of 'purple and green' with the entitlement, the tenderness of earth herself.

You truly humble me, with your words Thaddius, thank you once again for such a great review, full of pathos, and your inner insight. :) happy with you.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

northern lights, northern man, northern love...pure enchantment...warming these chilly bones of mine today....can't get much better than this...transported into your beautiful poem. I shall return soon:)

Thank you dearly my sweet friend. All is a muse.... even the air. I'm so glad you've felt my deep intentions with this piece. I will too, I always miss you! -x-

[Scott Metro]

Beautiful Elisa.
I can't say more..you know why..


Admiration Sis..
Scotty Wolf

LOL, I feel so flattered my friend, (bro) he he... thank you with whole my heart Scotty Wolf. -x-

[Scott Metro]

I can't say anything else or I won't be able to stop.
xo

[NeiL ArandA]

I will run out of words to describe how brilliant and beautiful you are Ms NATURAL . If I would compare you with a male actor. I would use Keanu Reeves in the movie Matrix. The way Keanu moved in that role was like poetry in motion. You're piece flows and moves like Neo. And the world has to stop so we could see you in slow motion. Nothing is missed . It's even safe not to breathe or skip a heart beat. So we won't missed anything. Somehow you found the perfect balance and harmony between words and rhythm.
A Poetry In Motion...

I love it you name Neo.... ;) Thank you, thank you so much my friend... They say I have a male brain lol.... but a female body, (fortunately) this was a fantastic review, I can't thank you enough Neil. You really spoil me so much! Sigh.... I'm humbled by your words.... x

[NeiL ArandA]

The pleasure is always mine. I won't hold back if the credit is rightfully due.

Thank you so much, you're such a good reviewer, and even a better person Neil. x

[s y e]

A romantic and beautiful write! Well done! The video is amazing and the picture is beautiful xox

Sye, love thank you!!! :) xoxo

[s y e]

Anytime hun!! xox

[kublakhan27]

Perfect...the Northern Lights are a big deal where I'm from (Canada, not that they're not a big deal everywhere of course lol)...there's an almost spiritual aura attached to them...this is the best poetic presentation of them that I've ever seen :)

Thank you dear kublakhan, really great you liked it. And for me an honor to have you by :)

[kublakhan27]

You're most welcome Elisa, and thank you for the kind words in return :)

:-)

[Priscilla Sayers]

Softness is the caress of the poetess in her reflection of love. Warmth fills the lines as the mingle in my mind. Such sweet romance in the aura exposed eloquently painting the fusion of souls meant to be together. Lovely sweet sis!

And your words so eloquent, you always see you're a painter dear... you speak as you paint, love you thank you so much! hi 10 XXX

[Priscilla Sayers]

XOXO!

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

A romantic, personified concept of one my favorite nightly landscapes. Beautiful write!

Thank you so much dear x

[Mic]

Must agree... 'romantic' would be the word. Excellent imagery and flow. It even looks as it feels.

Very well done!

Thanks Mic :)