~Macabre Magnifique

~ Many see death as somthing very scary, or eerie. While there is true beauty in it...

~Macabre Magnifique

 

Enjoyment in small scale

Acceptance of death

By early years,

As I dance on my so

 

Majeur Macabre

Magnifique as liquid can burn

Your stomache for

The dance of the death

 

With your feet on white

Lilies light, as a feather

In the dusk of the evening

Rotate and move like a marionette

 

Your hair is dancing in the wind

It is the last shimmering light you see, 

Until new light is being announced

In a new world full of desire

Aware just of your last dance

 

Your life is like music can entrust

Each felt note from your soul

From eternity, and lightly grow

In the next green timeless eras

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

~ My second write about the Danse Macabre, read also one of my earlier works:

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Elisisciousz/811513/




Thank you xx

Reviews

[Victorious]

Dear E.L.,

Excellent choice in music. I enjoy classical music as it allows a breath of art through vision. I think of a waltz between death and eternity. Wow, I just looked up what "macabre" meant and it makes me realize this is extremely darkly written. It's ironic and makes a pleasant oxymoron of bliss and death. The music plus the poem itself takes me to a night of romantic contrast between life, death, and music. Indeed there is beauty in death for death is not an ending, but a new beginning into what you have called "timeless eras." Or perhaps death gives inspiration to timeless eras of music. I find this piece to be romantic and relative to the beautiful music you have here.

My favorite lines are: "Your hair is dancing in the wind
It is the last shimmering light you see,
Until new light is being announced
In a new world full of desire
Aware just of your last dance"

Well done!

Sincerely Victorious

God bless you!

Thank you dear one, as you do your name honor! Veni vedi vici.... dear soul.... Yes, you capture it perfectly. There is always light in the dark, thank you again for your heartfelt review. I really appreciate your words. xoxo Eli

[Sami Khalil]

A dance of life and death within our timeless souls...The passion, the desires, the will to overcome macabre nature... But the acceptance of death as a beautiful outcome to a love filled life and adventure... When we achieve our purposes in life then we can see death as a beginning to another journey...
Awesome writes as always dear E.L....

Thank you dearly Sami for your wonderful words

[Sami Khalil]

Smiling...

[Nautili]

very hauntingly beautiful....if you have faith in an afterlife i think it is easier to not be so scared...

Exactly dear. So true... or if you have experienced it earlier twice. xx

[Nautili]

...sounds interesting!

[Muse]

To dance at the last chance of death...absolutely stunning. Everything about this is artful. The subject matter I'm quite fond of. Only an eccentric mind can appreciate the beauty of it all....but no matter. It was a wonderful read El!
xxoxxo

Muse

Thank you hon x

[Rene Velez]

nice wording, great imagery, the music suits the poem well, and I for one am not a classical listener, but none the less very enjoyable.

Thank you so much Rene it is an classic danse macabre thanks for your words

[Corset]

are we not all marionettes for the Gods to play with? A grand greenhouse of who can love the most wins the prize of peace and light. I'm afraid I maybe falling behind of late in that race for the enlightenment prize, sigh...I run to you to refill, you and your lovely poetry.

Thank you so much dear poetess x

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Your hair is dancing in the wind
It is the last shimmering light you see,
My fav part! Great poetry I have to say! 100/100

Thank you so much Katerina. :)

[.]

you're welcome! :D

[SHEEMA HUQ]

i believe that when someone dies, a new beggining arrives, taking a philospophical approach when losing someone close can sooth and support the grieving process aswell as all the adjustments one has to make in one's own life, thanks for the poem and for triggering me off....

Thank you for your beautiful thoughts as always Sheema :)

[Distant horizons]

Each felt note from your soul.....Beautiful awords and imagery, as ever

Thank you my friend

[Kenneth The Poet]

Like Absinthe.

Clever clever... you picked that also out... :D

[Kenneth The Poet]

The hallucinogenic nature of the piece, the bottle and the font color.

Yep!!!, see your page..... :)

[Ed Hart]

Absinthe makes the heart grow fonder.

[Kenneth The Poet]

:D