~ Cheesecake

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~ Just don't think, and taste...

~ Cheesecake

When we were on the coast of Andalucia

In a small picturesque place

Full of colorful windows

And narrow streets…

You let me see a street

Where you have been before

I felt happy when the sun shone

And the birds flew,

Even though it was 45 degrees celcius

My skin was red of love

And my cheeks blushed

Only for your touch

You took me for tasting

The best cheesecake in town

And I could only think of the pleasure

This feeling in conjunction with your

Gaze while my fork would slip inside my mouth

You are a person who gets the worst

In me above, just by the way you look at me

What exactly is good, and I took a sigh, a breath…

As I walked through the alley

With your arms over my shoulders

The pure bliss and the fresh lemon taste

Of this cheesecake, made me relieve on a higher

Level, that day ... the aromas of your soul in the cafe

And the taste of this particular cheesecake you picked out

Mint lemon desert, oh it was an pure satisfaction and pleasure

~ Elisa Laura

© 2013

Author's Note

Thank you xx

This write is about Andalucia, near to the port of Gibraltar, where my roots lay,
And the State of Malaga, is official in history owned by the Morrocan people, so
I feel a bit of both, lol....

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Carl Drake Barnard

Hehe rememberable heading!! :) Wow Elisa :) you captured this beautifully and presented it vividly,my heart followed your words!! Well written,and fabulous choice words :) wel written abt Andalucia,cheesecake and I felled in your words the presence of your love well written!! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

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10 Years Ago

Glad I could take you with me for a while to Andalucia :) thanks so much for the many reviews :) knu.. read more

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Robbie~xoxo~

Delicious!...you had to write this didn't you? LOL I love cheesecake, and this is irresistible, Eli!

I had to read this twice!

"The pure bliss and the fresh lemon taste

Of this cheesecake, made me relieve on a higher

Level, that day ... the aromas of your soul in the cafe

And the taste of the cheesecake you picked out

Mint lemon desert, oh it was an pure satisfaction and pleasure"~ OMG!...What a delectable treat! Fabulous imagery, pleasing the mind's palate! Lovely!