~Hybrid

~ All together

~Hybrid

 

Living next to my neighbors,

Colored by their beauty

Some are Hybrid,

Others, are pure bloods

Together we will cure and color

The world full of racism

The assumptions

And the no goods,

To be gone forever

You’re a wonderful hybrid

Beautiful Dahlia flower

Even as your colored buddy is...

So ray within your beautiful vase

And be colorful these days

Where I shall embrace

You totally,

As we live together

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Carl Drake Barnard]

the life with neighbors,some can really be Grait people,I'm guessing they arern't white. And the fact that your not a racist is truly a loving sight making you a lovable person which I adore! You brought out a vivid image!! Grait use of words and expressions :) really an inspiring piece :)

Thank you Carl, I appreciate your review :)))

[Soul Fire]

Beautiful

Thank you :)

[Soul Fire]

you're welcome

[Pax]

Beautiful and uplifting message. very much enjoyed the hybrid poets.
great!

Thanks a lot dear friend

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Colors mixed together are what makes the world a brighter place so why can't we all get along and make the world shine forever... your poem is a beautiful theme for humanity.

Yesh! my core yearns for this! maybe I'm the only one... but I see we need to work together to get the world united more than it is falling appart some days..... xo thanks Dale :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I so agree with you Beautelisa, so you are not the only one xoxo

Glad I can share the beauty of togetherness and peace with you :) dear rebel, and lovely poet!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well i am a rebel with a cause, and that cause is to see unity of all cultures and color race or religion not be a wall between hearts.

I know, that's why I adore you being you! I'm the same.... I'm that rebelish girl of the north sea.. who hates injustice, and fight always for those who she loves....

[Nautili]

beautiful, Eli....my adorable niece is a hybrid i guess, mama from Kenya, my nephew from N.Y. She is so lucky to have such a rich culture-she has already been to Kenya before she turned one. It makes life so full of variety and wonderful experiences!

Thank you from another hybrid... :) Isn't that beautiful, so many cultures within us... or ancient roots... lovely mix she is... I bet she's beautiful. Xx

[SHEEMA HUQ]

curious use of language and i did appreciate the horticultual metaphores, relating to growth and celebration, thanks

Thank you very much sweetheart xx

[Sheila Kline]

May we all be one in heart, mind and spirit as we heed the advice you offer us in your poem! We are indeed of many different colors, cultures, but we are oh so "ONE" if we will but accept that the variations just make us more interesting - the profusion of variety of foods, dress, manner of expression, language we speak....so enjoyable!
It is wonderful you feel as this, as I also do!!

Thank you Sheila for your wonderful review, so glad we all are neighbors, and lovely souls :)

[Thefley]

I like this. My dad wrote a poem once that reminded me a lot of this. I think it is a great poem and is very relatable!

Thank you very much, for your time, and your review.

[Sami Khalil]

Artists and poets and enlightened people see the beauty and power in others regardless of racism and color... It is those fences we have to climb and peer into the garden of others to see another forms of beauty ...
Nice message and words...

Thank you so much Sami, peace and love :)

[Sami Khalil]

Smiling...

Thank you for all x

[Sami Khalil]

You are a million welcome...

[Coyote Poetry]

The flowers are beautiful. I like the description of them in your poem. I had to read the beautiful poem a few times. A positive poem for a morning read. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Thank you neighbor over seas :)