~ Mornings in Marrakech

~ Feel it... Minty

~ Mornings in Marrakech

 

In the magic of the Moroccan air

Full of perfume mixed with love

Gasoline and local food we smelled

We kissed and ate, and

We danced until the sun came up

My heart felt every bit of the ambience

Involved, and landed in our soul

Like little serotonin bubbles in my blood

Danced within the power, of being

When I closed my eyes, I felt the embrace

Of the North African beauty

Sultry mornings,

In our neighborhood

O’ lovely Marrakech

Where nights are golden and

Days are rich as the sun gives light

Let me be reborn into this magic

For ones and for always in your arms

I shall close my eyes, for ever

To whisper with your love

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[KeeD]

Morocco brought to life by words, I felt the rich morning sun and the markets along with the cool nights as the breeze refreshed my face making me realize i'm still in my room but wow did your poem take me on a first class journey to Morocco. Much love and respect for this piece. amazing

Aw thank you so much, so did yours with me.... it's amazing! I miss gibraltar, and Morocco for the whole night now lol.... thank you dearly!

[ba_mcfarlane]

Paul Cezzane, Loreena McKennitt, you remind me of all of that, with this great write. I feel like I am in the Alhambra at dusk, listening to a Moorish yet also Celtic concert.
Kudos

Thank you very much my kind friend, glad you liked it :)

[Priscilla Sayers]

Beautiful My Lovely Eli!
It whispered softly in my mind, soothing...
Love it!
The pic, breath~taking.
The sweet passion in love and ambiance, simply gorgeous.

Thank you so much sweet sister, so glad you loved it xoxo

[Pax]

lovely and very rich in imagery. I would loved to experience that ambience one day..great i could almost feel and taste Fervent ambience ...wonderful journey in writing.

Thank you dear

[Pax]

your very much welcome dear friend.

[emmajoy]

Oh Elisa, many thank yous for taking me to a place i've dreamed of visiting for ages; for sharing its magical atmosphere, its mysterious corners and its sunlit forever history! This is wonderful in every way, content, form and colour. Yumcious.

Thank you so much dear one glad you enjoyed xx

[poeticpiers]

beautifully written descriptive prose conjuring up a special ambience of mystery and romance

[*** Hey Jude***]

I like the touch of coluor you incorporate with descriptions that give great visuals. This “speaks” so beautifully. Very nice {El} ~ ***Heartsmiles***

Thank you Jude x

[*** Hey Jude***]

{{El}}, my pleasure ~ xx

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I surely felt this!...It fills the soul with the rich golden rays of the sunlight! I love the minty euphoria you have captured in this lovely piece... Magically taking me on what feels like a "magic carpet ride" to Marrakech. Gorgeous color and imagery within your format Sis! I love it!

Thank you so much love... It was so joyful.... minty as mint-tea... and the rituals, and love, of this rich culture.... thank you love! xo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I loved it...Mint is my favorite! This is a beautiful work of art as always.~xo~ :)

Thank you so much love... other minty thoughts, and experiences up now... :D:D from Andalucia, near to Morocco... my roots xo

[Audrey Howitt]

This is wonderfully lush and evocative--loved this!!

Oh Audrey, thank you so much, glad you loved this, and I could take you with me for a while... I was there last night...(in mind again)

[Audrey Howitt]

I would love to go there!!! Love the music you paired with this as well!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I been to Morocco too...Marrakech stayed there for 4 days...was so awesome...
you capture that beauty so well...
great poem :)

Thank you so much SoulCrusader :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

ahlan wasahlan :)

شكرا لك.

[Morning Star (SJA)]

Very beautiful poem. Wonderful descriptions, in that I truly felt I was there.
Just beautiful and inviting.

Thank you so much dear x

[Nautili]

You are fortunate to have experienced this! Thank you for sharing...it is so rich with the culture and feel of Morocco. i really liked this!

Thank you dear poetess x