~ Purus Susurris

~ Natura in sua optima forma

~ Purus Susurris

 

Surrounded by the shadows of the trees

I felt the sound of the swirling leaves,

The wind with it's own music

I sigh with the touch

Of oxygen on my skin

It is weightless, honest and tender

Makes me want to swim

In the leaves of hope

The owls make their peculiar noises

As the cracking of the branches

And I walked on, 

It gave a peaceful sound

All being and feeling around

I found some mushrooms

And elves benches on trees,

Ants heaps, acorns, and beechnuts

I feel at home among the leaves

 The humid atmosphere gives sultry

Warmth to the foggy and mysterious air,

I heared the trees talking over there

"What is she doing here" ?

But I laughed at them kindly

And tickled their dark brown barks

Whispered to them, and left them

Some remarkable marks

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you so much xx

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Beautiful read of the wondrous nature all around us. This one just floats...very nice.

Thanks dear.... Tonight will read more of you, I'm pleased that you enjoyed this one xxx

[Pax]

i love the nature's feel around this write... the fun ending makes me giggle... seems magical and fairy tale like... may i know what is the meaning of the title?.... an amusing write dearest...

Thank you sweetie, it was a little magic he? Hihi... Sssshttt was my intention also, the title means Pure Whispers, more Whispers, in Latin, thank you so much, I did review yesterday a lot of ppl finally had some time, I will come back for you, ppl feel ignored, if you read this, don't feel, ignored, I'm on my way and hope not forgetting anyone.... X

[Pax]

yup, its a bit magical.... oh.. now i know... you know a lot of language dearest... admirable... its ok dearest... I always know your just around... and your most welcome...

Muwah.... When I'm back from the hospital I will delve into your library xxx

[Sugar Plum ♥]

You are like a forest fairy here, walking in the heart of the green nature! So calming are your poems always for me! The nature is source of all good in world!
thanks God some people understand it :) Beautiful and pure...

You're one of them too :) and you are living rich in mind... I adore that. Thank you gorgeous!

[Eloha]

I like the atmosphere you create, it's very elven, sylvan and all that is green and tender!

Yes, sometimes, the Gilraen in me speaks... thank you Michael x

[Aubin]

I have missed your writings! Work has prevented me from coming online, but your poems are mesmerizing. Thank you!

Thank you so much dear Aubin, means a lot! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

There is nothing like being at one with mother nature... the purity of it cleanses the soul... such a wonder poem full of beauty and serenity.

Thank you so much dear Dale, and beautiful friend, to see the innocent beauty of our Earth.... glad you respect it. xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh I love nature, it is an endless miracle if we pay attention.

So glad you say that... yes it is... we not are aware enough. I think... And we will get payed for it... if we do not listen. So true... much warm greetings your way!