~ Rumba

~ I Love....

~ Rumba

 

 

 

The reflection of your soul is

Dancing in my eyes

 By the dusk

Mixed with the sultry

And candlelight in the

Perfect evening hue

You look at me, and have my

Hands as we

Suffering permanent

Our feet shuffling

When two lovers on a

Gramophone record

Play their love

Into history

Of time,

And modern rebirth

Turning and turning

Moving forward,

Or backwards

The sheer power

That comes from your wrists

Provides leadership in this

Mysterious sensual dance

We both share

Incredible like fresh

 Rain dew on

Sunday mornings

You're irresistible

Attractive

Smooth and intelligent

You aftershave has

Not bygone ever

But is so fresh as our

First touch

I get intoxicated by the

Sorcery of your

Hypnotic gaze

And can totally

Surrender into the

Sensuality of your

Artists arms

Knowing that I

By your touch

Will glow

Into a colorful cloth

Where you minutes

And hours

Can enjoy me

And watch your 

Canvas carefully

The serenity of my skin

With your visual touch

Full of love and a

Touch to your artwork

While you gently

and sensual

Let me move

Until I am nude, for you

Totally nude...

For only you...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

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Thank you xx

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

Submissively lead by the power of your lovers wrist across the dance floor... *sighs*

I think there is a distinct beauty in the differences and in the workings of dominance and submission. Being it healthy of course. It is within our nature. And it is quite passionate.

A very colorful write. Full of lovely imagery and sounds. As always astounding art Elisa. xx

Such a wonderful review again from you on this oldie... love it! :) be prepared when I come by to you... lol you need to hide for it will be a review bomb! -x- :)

[icelandicblue]

You capture the sensuality of the dance in your poem with your enticing words and sultry imagery:

And can totally
Surrender into the
Sensuality of your
Artists arms

It is the artistry of love that shines through most of all.

Thank you very very much Anne, for reviewing this very oldie of me... lol :) I'm happy you enjoyed...

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Needed to start from scratch,to start from the beginning so let me see your poems :) hmm the dance of love,your love for your beloved :) Grait and simple form :) you really railed me in with the first two lines truly beautiful! And I know that man really cares and love you :)

Thank you so much Carl, I missed this one, lol, I'm so sorry! ;-) I bet you know him :)))) thank you with whole my heart soentjis en drukkies, van Nederland, to South Afrika....

[Carl Drake Barnard]

hehe my dearest lady friend! My pleasure lovely*

Thank you, dear... :)

[Lover Of Words]

Wow the romance is flawless here... Great job!!

Thank you dear so much, for entering the realm of the Rumba I danced with someone ;) very special... lol it's an older write, but still so warm! I shall come by soon for you, bear with me... I'm trying to feel better soon, physically & mentally.

[Lover Of Words]

Take your time dear one

Thank you, for saying that.... sigh. It's hard to leave this place, with so many sweet friends...read moreThank you, for saying that.... sigh. It's hard to leave this place, with so many sweet friends...
But I need to listen to my health.... (not easy). But with your trust, I can only heal faster :))) x

[Lover Of Words]

I shall still be working the pen each time you grace me with your lovely beauty my dear

[Pax]

...a romantic dance...of passion....dance in the rhythm of joyous rhyme of the melody running in our views...sending electric dance moves...
great write!!!

Thanks buddy

[Pax]

no probs...its always a pleasure reading your works my friend..

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Romantic in high degree, sensual, emotional, full with erotic dance...All your peoms have something mysterious and enchanting, I see different world, created from feelings and love! my favorite :

I get intoxicated by the
Sorcery of your
Hypnotic gaze
And can totally
Surrender into the
Sensuality of your
Artists arms

Hehe, yes, this one is one of my dancing past.... If you dance the Rumba, you have to feel really sensual, if not, it won't work... :D so me and my hubby danced it often when we were younger... :)

[Lily Mae]

I'd say you captured perfectly the art and desire of the dance ;) xoxo I love it..xo

Thanks love! It was a special dance... lol xo

[emmajoy]

'Knowing I ~ By your touch ~ Will glow ~ Into a colorful cloth ~ Where you minutes ~ Can enjoy me'

Words to dance to and love by, blissful, dear girl, blissful.

Thank you sweet Em! *smiling*

[Empirik]

Wow, this has so much more meaning than a dance between connected/artisian souls. This is incredibly sexy too, like that wonderful horn. You utilize the descriptive quality of words to make a clear portrayal of two dancers in the moment...or love. I always love your poems. They settle deep in me and never will they leave. If I only had a photographic memory, I would have them all memorized, even before my own words. Lovely!!! X

Dank je wel lieverd X

[Empirik]

U bent van harte welkom ziel koningin! X