~ The Revival (Part 3.)

~ The Déjà vu with Julien ~ Poetic story about some of my far away past, mixed up with mytology, and fantasy

 

~ The Revival (Part 3.)

 

 

 

Julien wondered where he was...

In the scintillation of all these maidens

Who were staring at him

He had no clue, he was confused

As he lost his memory, and all became blank.

 

Still there was one he touched

His hand went through her long gray hair

As he had a sparkle of love in his eyes

Nienna watched him with no hurt but only grace

“Hello Julien” she whispered...

 

Now you’re one of us, the first male Nymph

We gave you immortality till the never ending

Nothingness will spread your eternity

Within our beloved seabed

“We have waited for you”

 

Their voices rang like an underwater choir

And echoed along a several times

Nienna’s powers and health became

Weaker and weaker as she swum

Back to her shipwreck to rest

 

Julien realized that he no longer

Could return to civilization

As he heard cannon battles above him

Reaching down below to the cold deep waves

While above him the battle continued

 

He accepted his fate, and Realized

That he could not do much more

Then, to adapt in the world of

The wonderful beauty

Were he was placed

 

 

 

~ To be continued

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you very much for reading,

Based on true facts, and my mixed fantasy.
(The Dunkirkers are one of my ancetors)

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Horizon K.]

Oh this is so curious and so dreamy. In the last chapter I thought Julien had forced himself upon some woman, but here these Nymphs have chosen him, forgiven him it seems, and I wonder so much about what he has inside to make him the special one, and this special relationship with Nienna... who I think has given up much of her own power and immortality to bring him into her world. There is love there, a mysterious love and I will read on!

The sentence:
"And echoed along a several times"
could be edited. maybe remove the "a", or perhaps simply "echoed several times", but off of something like the ocean floor...

Julien learned from his past sis, he was a rough seaman, but now he, is karmatised (is that a word?) lol.... :) you know what i mean i guess hihi...
Thank you so much dear sis, for noticing me on that, I will edit..... x you're the best!!!

[Horizon K.]

karmatised .. a word? I have no idea, but I know exactly what you mean! Love that idea sis!

hehe thank you so much, I just made that word........ now I will never forget I did, you're such a lovely soul, tomorrow I will read the next chapter of you, oooh can't wait! so curious! xo

[Tate Morgan]

the sirens all call to the love lorn and poetic among us promising bliss but dealing us death instead

Thank you for dropping your thoughts Tate :)

[Distant horizons]

What a beautiful imagination you have Elisa. Has a feel of an epic tale, still to be told.

Thanks Lorry :) yes there will be more soon ;) Thanks for reading part 3. X

[LOfCharlemagne]

This feels like an epic story. You make it happen so effortlessly it is insane. I love the fantasy and drama that you have set up in this, it feels vibrantly effective! Well done, this is incredible

Thank you very much for readin part 3. and your time, There is more to come soon!

[LOfCharlemagne]

Awesome! You are very welcome!

[Redboy]

awesome

Thank you for reading part 3. The other ones are beneath it... :) couldn't put them into a novel yet, but working on that :D

[Eloha]

This indeed does feel like part of a series, it feels as if you are ready to write a novel or something grand like that.

I like the mythological flavor, nearly like a children's fantasy book...

I was going to start this, because there was demand for it ... :)
Thank you very much dear poet.