~ The Green Nymph of the North Sea (Part 1.)

~ Poetic story about some of my far away past, mixed up with mytology, and fantasy

~ The Green Nymph of the North Sea

 

Shimmer in this deep dark waves

Made her hazy vision clear

If small pearly reflections

Turned her way, like tiny suns

Could shine on dark gray days

 

There was no other light

Just as the light in her self

Which kept her moving

She lived for more than four hundred

Centuries long deep under the Sea 

 

Still there was never one shipper

Or sailor who had found her

Her fate was written in her being

Like others wished her bad, but

As strong as she was, she always smiled

 

Some days she saw other mortals die

As she wondered when it was her time

She knew she was special cursed

Her long hair was in the meantime gray,

But still she had a beautiful young face

And eyes so sharp, she wasn’t blind

 

In the days were she was still mortal

She was an beautiful princess taken by

The Dunkirkers who raped her, and

Where her pregnant healthy body after

They poisoned her and her unborn child

 

Was dumped in the mystical North Sea

But she is still awake in the dark and forgotten

Seabed, where she waits, until the moment

Presents itself, and were she and others victims

Shall dance among the revengeful souls and

Whispering their immortality in their lungs

 

 

So she and her unborn child will be reborn

 

To be continued...

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Based on true facts, and my mixed fantasy.
(The Dunkirkers are one of my ancetors)

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Horizon K.]

Dreamy and melancholy... Yet this beautiful nymph who's life was spoilt by evil deeds maintains a smile as she waits patiently for her destiny to unfold.

It's very exciting to see you writing
Stories Elisa... And I noticed below that this one will continue. I await the continuation of your tale and very curious if you will continue in this lovely poetic style and this nymphs fate...

xx Horizon

Thank you so much sister, for your support, and time... (lately I was so busy) but I have a little bit more time, so I could finally edit them, and put the 6 poetic stories back in here... :) (if I can improve something or if you see errors, please say so...) Your help is fantastic, and I'm so pleased you liked it, it will continue, they are all in logical order on my page now, I will be back for your book too.. promise! already have read much of you... Thank you sister xx

[Horizon K.]

I will look for the other chapters:)
As far as mistakes ... Are you going for perfect grammar? You do use were twice, when I think you mean when or where... A few other things I can recommend, but easier when I am at home tonight...
xx

Yes, thanks for that one sis.... It's my typical Eli error, lol, I guess everyone would recognize me by those... I will look it up, great you notice me once again, sometimes I'm so blind for those.... Yes please mail me!! love and thankies xxx

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E.L. your writing is always exquisite and this is no exception!

Thank you lynn. Always nice to see you by dear

[Poetic Justice]

oh thats a dark tale..written with your signature beautiful phrasing..

Thank you dear PJ

[Distant horizons]

All the victims shall be reborn, and those who caused the suffering will hopefully one day, face the reality of their actions. Beautifully crafted words, as ever Elisa.

In the neme of the sea, Thank you! X

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

When we are faced with such a tragedy closure is the only way to move on... your words are gripping and very moving.

Thank you sweetie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome beautelisa :)