~ The Finger

~ The Finger

 

 

In old forgotten days

Where she was a little one

There was always something

To think about and the fist raised

If she didn’t agree with the mature

Or felt their failure, as a waste

 

The finger was a message

To those hatred people

From early state she knew

Some were lovable,

Others had no clue

But the finger was their due

 

She was an early rebel

One who hated injustice

One who fought for right

And to spread the lovely light

It was just they wouldn’t see

What the child brought so bright

 

She loved to give the finger

To those who weren’t honest,

For them who made some fights

And even when she was just five

She did knew all her rights.

 

So if you recognize her,

Please come and tell me soon,

Because I’m searching for her

Finger to put out into this room

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

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Oh does this bring back nostalgia. I remember when I learned what that fingered meant at a very young age, and the power I felt from it. Lol kids do the darnedest things , and I love how you portrayed that in this piece. I think we can all pretty much relate to this. Great job, Elisa (as usual) .
-Cord

Thank you very much Cord :) lol... yes, we have all some memories, of these moments hehe

[Lily Mae]

This made me smile.. I have a picture of when I was 7 and blond and blue eye'd and boy was I giving someone the finger...lol.. we have those moments..lol

Lol oooh Lil I knew you was like that too lol thanks hun

[Renée]

lol !! Love this one !! q ;

Haha thanks Renée lol

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I think I found her running up my stairs... wait a minute...now she's in the kitchen grabbing some homemade cookies that I just made.... Can I give her some milk before I send her back to you? She's not Lactose intolerant is she? lol

I love this! Fun, and Very clever, Eli!

Hahaha sis, first she have to put the finger in your room lol we need her both, after the milk sent her home, she has being rebellish... Lol I hope she isn't Lactose intolerant lol... Than we have fingers and farts ha! Love to you sis X

[Robbie~xoxo~]

lol No, that would not be good!... I think she's okay though, she didn't complain about a stomach ache, she's a tough cookie! ;)
She's all yours Eli, thanks for letting her visit me! Love you too Sis!~xo~

Hahaha, lol I just came back from work, now you made my day sis... :D

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oh Wow!... back at work already?... take it easy Sis! Don't overdo it! Glad you're smiling though. :)

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Loved this! Oddly enough it had a lighthearted feel to it ... That's the way it came across to me lol

100/100

HAHA thanks luv! ;)

[Peaceworker22]

What's with the huge space for so little words?

I don't understand either lol... Maybe Samantha posted somethinf with it? What doesn't show up here?

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

lol idk what happened didn't add anything but whats there ???

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Ill try to fix it

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

well it did not work ... that would bug me lol

[Peaceworker22]

I see.

Haha thanks Samantha anyway, I saw this happened one time before with someones review, very weird but it's ok :) xo

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

:)

[afra]

lol i love this ....i enjoyed reading this so much ...well done

LOL meant to joke and poke a little around :D