~ The Finger

~ The Finger

 

 

In old forgotten days

Where she was a little one

There was always something

To think about and the fist raised

If she didn’t agree with the mature

Or felt their failure, as a waste

 

The finger was a message

To those hatred people

From early state she knew

Some were lovable,

Others had no clue

But the finger was their due

 

She was an early rebel

One who hated injustice

One who fought for right

And to spread the lovely light

It was just they wouldn’t see

What the child brought so bright

 

She loved to give the finger

To those who weren’t honest,

For them who made some fights

And even when she was just five

She did knew all her rights.

 

So if you recognize her,

Please come and tell me soon,

Because I’m searching for her

Finger to put out into this room

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

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Oh does this bring back nostalgia. I remember when I learned what that fingered meant at a very young age, and the power I felt from it. Lol kids do the darnedest things , and I love how you portrayed that in this piece. I think we can all pretty much relate to this. Great job, Elisa (as usual) .
-Cord

Thank you very much Cord :) lol... yes, we have all some memories, of these moments hehe

[tekphobik]

You amaze me at your ability to write about something like flipping people off. You're still one of my favourites to read because you keep me amused. Keep it up.

Thanks a lot!

[Antonio Valentino]

oh thats what it means.. and all along i thought i was getting half the peace sign.. haha

nice write as always my friend.. :)

Lol you know dear friend for u I raise two fingers :P you're one of the special ones in the club lol

[Antonio Valentino]

okay as long as coughing isnt required hahaha

:)

LOL tssss.....

[Kenneth The Poet]

They call it the single finger salute...and this is a perfect one.

LOL thanks buddy :D

[Kerri Hart]

i knew it wud be good when I saw the picture and heared the music
extremely impressed! well done!
100/100

Ha! thanks lol :) this one was just a joke, I'm very kind normally uuuh :)

[Kerri Hart]

hahah LOL understaandable :)

:)

[realmwriter]

It felt very light hearted to me as well. I really enjoyed this piece...! Thought it wa rather cute.

Thank you my friend, :)

[realmwriter]

Very welcome...!

[quinfinn]

this is amazing and truthful to a fault... the photo is absolutely priceless as well. kudos abounding to you!

Hehe lol.... ah you see me in it? ;)

[quinfinn]

fantastic photo! yes, now that you mention it....hmmm

;) fantastic review!!

[quinfinn]

;)

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

She loved to give the finger

To those who weren’t honest,

For them who made some fights

And even when she was just five

She did knew all her rights

..............very nice to read, best wishes.

Thank you KNK :)

[Pax]

i think i know she is but i would not tell..hmm..lol.
great insightful read E.L.

Thank you my friend ;)

[Distant horizons]

I think I recognise her from everyday of my childhood. No, it's just the finger I recognize :-)
As ever Elisa, Uniquely you. Only you could turn such a salute into such a clever warning. I bet other five year olds would love this.

Lol thankles Lorry ha!

[Distant horizons]

:-)

[Peaceworker22]

Love it, and agree!

Thank you!