~ Sultry Disreality

~ Sultry Disreality

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~ Everyone can fly.

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~ Sultry Disreality


 

 

My thoughts,

Are not to catch

In your unfathomable

Delightful attempts

They fly a little higher

Along blue peaks

And thin air

Where thoughts

As Dionysos

Could give color

In sultry disreality

And where he completely

Could surrender in

And get lost in the

Arms of beauty

Without knowing

He was already there

I met him

In the clouds

And admired his

Drifted visions

Braided

In my mind

As paths of

Three different

Glossy insights

Standing at

An endpoint

Where the mind

Was in peace

And could

Whisper Nirvana

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2012


Author's Note

The picture is one of my mascottes, I had it for a long time on facebook, people shall remember. I always feel very comfy when I escape in one of my brain chambers and fly away~



Thank you xx

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We all need our moment of Nirvana . Whether it is spiritual or mental it is a great awakening to the truth we all carry within to conceive ourselves and the world in a peaceful , loving way...
I hope your clouds will always carry the much needed rain for our parched souls.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Balance is the key to all, love your words Sami thank you :)
Sami Khalil

12 Years Ago

Smiling...

12 Years Ago

Me too :)



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Lofty thoughts captured in lyrical ballad

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much
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Pax
simply beautiful !

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thank you xo
Dreams can take us any place we want and places no one else has been... so much bliss in your words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thanks Dale :)
If I am ever out of balance I have only to visit you :) and a few other here to help me restore myself to my center, and rise with the balloons as if floating on air, life is good, good friends are better, old friends are sacred. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thank you Corset and sweetheart, p.s. I like your new name :)
I need to drown myself in some Nirvana:) thank you for reminding me it's out there waiting in beauty and as you said.. in balance..xo

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

You're so welcome lovely. Yes from time to time we need Nirvana. Many thank yous xoxo
This was a wonderful dance of passion and love. Your musical choices for your poems are always the best! I liked the idea of climbing higher above your lover. That elevates your relationship to a heavenly place, a destination of true love and respect, a venue with a total sense of Nirvana. This is beautiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much dear poet and friend your words make me smile
Clockwork

12 Years Ago

Your very welcome :-)
Thievery Corporation works well for this, too.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Ha! Yes, I'm a big lover of them, only for Dionysos it would be way to modern ;)
We all need our moment of Nirvana . Whether it is spiritual or mental it is a great awakening to the truth we all carry within to conceive ourselves and the world in a peaceful , loving way...
I hope your clouds will always carry the much needed rain for our parched souls.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Balance is the key to all, love your words Sami thank you :)
Sami Khalil

12 Years Ago

Smiling...

12 Years Ago

Me too :)
Ooooo!!! Love this write! Its so calming and peaceful. I wish i could soar in the sky! lol.. i love the love in the air of this poem. =)
So cute!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much lovely, you can fly with me :)
Sleeping Maiden

12 Years Ago

YAY! for flying!! Fly among the beautiful birds ~ WHOOOOO!!! =D
Simply beautiful.Picture perfect words

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thankles sigñor Lorry x
Distant horizons

12 Years Ago

:-)

:-)

and

:-)

12 Years Ago

*___~

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