~ Sultry Disreality

~ Sultry Disreality

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~ Everyone can fly.

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~ Sultry Disreality


 

 

My thoughts,

Are not to catch

In your unfathomable

Delightful attempts

They fly a little higher

Along blue peaks

And thin air

Where thoughts

As Dionysos

Could give color

In sultry disreality

And where he completely

Could surrender in

And get lost in the

Arms of beauty

Without knowing

He was already there

I met him

In the clouds

And admired his

Drifted visions

Braided

In my mind

As paths of

Three different

Glossy insights

Standing at

An endpoint

Where the mind

Was in peace

And could

Whisper Nirvana

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2012


Author's Note

The picture is one of my mascottes, I had it for a long time on facebook, people shall remember. I always feel very comfy when I escape in one of my brain chambers and fly away~



Thank you xx

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We all need our moment of Nirvana . Whether it is spiritual or mental it is a great awakening to the truth we all carry within to conceive ourselves and the world in a peaceful , loving way...
I hope your clouds will always carry the much needed rain for our parched souls.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Balance is the key to all, love your words Sami thank you :)
Sami Khalil

12 Years Ago

Smiling...

12 Years Ago

Me too :)



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I heart your heart, I love your poetry more.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thanks
Charming, enrapturing enlightenment that conjure up images of peaceful disillusions... reality then dreams. Well penned and absolutely creative :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, thoughts, and words :)
cool. I like the music

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thanks
A startling dreamish song... your words evoke such emotional tides... ebbs and flows of feeling and movement... life in a dance of wonder and flight... Heart soaring here.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Always an honor to have you bij Craig! Thank you so much, also for the mail x
Lovely! A fantasy Shangri-la... ah to dwell there! xox

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thank you dear Sharonlee xxx
this is a good poem and good title "sultry displeasure"
Good write it's meaningful and creative absolutely creative

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your nice review much apprechiated

12 Years Ago

But the title was different.... lol
Rhianne Ney

12 Years Ago

oh OoO
the picture does match yer words after a fashion ;) nice poem...nice read

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Lol actually the poem wasn't about fashion at all lol but about reaching the old Greek god of wine a.. read more
gombeggar

12 Years Ago

ohh...but i got that, yeah

12 Years Ago

I didn't doubt about that hehe :)
Nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

I can't look in the state of ur mind, I feel sorry for ur struggling, I )mysef just love to stay pos.. read more
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Peaceworker22

12 Years Ago

Um, I should put that on PM.
I love so many of your desrciption, the light and effortless way the poem glides.... So smooth, truly a surreal experience created my a creature of great depth! I love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear... Tonight im exploring my new bought smartphone sorry for not being so much .. read more

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