~ Sultry Disreality

~ Everyone can fly.

~ Sultry Disreality

 

 

My thoughts,

Are not to catch

In your unfathomable

Delightful attempts

They fly a little higher

Along blue peaks

And thin air

Where thoughts

As Dionysos

Could give color

In sultry disreality

And where he completely

Could surrender in

And get lost in the

Arms of beauty

Without knowing

He was already there

I met him

In the clouds

And admired his

Drifted visions

Braided

In my mind

As paths of

Three different

Glossy insights

Standing at

An endpoint

Where the mind

Was in peace

And could

Whisper Nirvana

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

The picture is one of my mascottes, I had it for a long time on facebook, people shall remember. I always feel very comfy when I escape in one of my brain chambers and fly away~



Thank you xx

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

We all need our moment of Nirvana . Whether it is spiritual or mental it is a great awakening to the truth we all carry within to conceive ourselves and the world in a peaceful , loving way...
I hope your clouds will always carry the much needed rain for our parched souls.

Balance is the key to all, love your words Sami thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

Smiling...

Me too :)

[ba_mcfarlane]

I heart your heart, I love your poetry more.

Thanks

[Castonovia]

Charming, enrapturing enlightenment that conjure up images of peaceful disillusions... reality then dreams. Well penned and absolutely creative :)

Thanks for your review, thoughts, and words :)

[Baby Ricochet]

cool. I like the music

Thanks

[An owl on the moon]

A startling dreamish song... your words evoke such emotional tides... ebbs and flows of feeling and movement... life in a dance of wonder and flight... Heart soaring here.

Always an honor to have you bij Craig! Thank you so much, also for the mail x

[sharonlee]

Lovely! A fantasy Shangri-la... ah to dwell there! xox

Thank you dear Sharonlee xxx

[Rhianne Ney]

this is a good poem and good title "sultry displeasure"
Good write it's meaningful and creative absolutely creative

Thank you so much for your nice review much apprechiated

But the title was different.... lol

[Rhianne Ney]

oh OoO

[gombeggar]

the picture does match yer words after a fashion ;) nice poem...nice read

Lol actually the poem wasn't about fashion at all lol but about reaching the old Greek god of wine and his magnificent ways of exploring the beyond of that time

[gombeggar]

ohh...but i got that, yeah

I didn't doubt about that hehe :)

[Peaceworker22]

Nice.

Thanx Painted :)

*Pained ;)

[Peaceworker22]

Lol! Pained! I always feel that way, so I figured, "why not use that as my name"???

Sorry new smartphone all touch screen for me now ... :P

[Peaceworker22]

I see. Had that problem before, not fun.

yes.... Al will get used lol x

[Peaceworker22]

When I travel my mind, I always see a crying child wrapped in chains in the dark. Either that, or I'm always fighting something. I guess the only "Nirvana" I have is the memory of being in Mt. Charleston's forest smelling the spiced air from the pines, seeing wildflowers and the view from one of the higher points in the area. Seeing more cliffs and tons of huge pines as well as a beautiful sky/horizon.

[Peaceworker22]

One of the very few happy memories I have left...

[Peaceworker22]

Ugh, gotta stop being a killjoy.

I can't look in the state of ur mind, I feel sorry for ur struggling, I )mysef just love to stay positive, it took long but never want to relive depressive again

[Peaceworker22]

Um, I should put that on PM.

[Priscilla Sayers]

I love so many of your desrciption, the light and effortless way the poem glides.... So smooth, truly a surreal experience created my a creature of great depth! I love it!

Thank you so much dear... Tonight im exploring my new bought smartphone sorry for not being so much around hehe, tomorrow I'm :) xxxx