~ Surrexit

~ A poetic story about Trishna

~ Surrexit

 

In the thirsty streams

Where all the hot

Summer sun was gone

And the reeds of the earth

Were admonished to straw

 

Her hand  grabbed the last

Mud from the water down

There was no clue of being

It was half past dusk

The air was clammy

 

Dry sand filled with craquelé cracks

She felt under her fingernails

It scraped and pecked

She was back on earth

But not more in prosperous states

 

Risen from the dead

In a whirlpool of destruction

Without any need

Or expectation no helping

Hand or any empathy

 

She was nothing but void,

Dead and soulless

In these empty summers

Full of "Trishna" she had to

Crawl until her bones turned to dust

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

This was just some dark art... hope you sleep well ;)
Thank you xx

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Scary!...(I'm reading this in the wee hours of the night)
Wow Eli, didn't know this side of your art...very refreshing in a haunting way! I love it!...we all have different sides to us that should pour into our work of art once in awhile. This is captivating! Great write, Sis.

Thank you sis, honestly and normally not my type and genre to write about, but some changes now and then are good I think :) glad you picked that up ;) love to you sis x

[Muse]

It's the meloncholy energy that at times inspires the best of writes! This human emotion of darkness was made to be shared...if you can do it with a stunning display of poetry...then pen it girl...my hat is off for you!

Thank you very much Muse :)

[Sleeping Maiden]

Creepy....XD my goodness...the image totally fits your words here...
Very different! I like it. It scares me... lol. I love the darkness. Haunting.. chilling...
~ WELL done! ~

Hehe that was my intention also to scare a little ;) I tried something different yes, this is my third horror poem, so far) Thank you dear X

[Sleeping Maiden]

ahh i see. well, great job on the scaring! the picture..is creepy..XD lol...

Thanks again, yes it really is... ;) loved the bangs, it was simular as mine ;) muhaha... lol xx

[Sleeping Maiden]

lol...>>.

[Pax]

the image adds up to the chilling/horror and haunting/dark of the poem. I like it. good job.

Thank you, glad you did... even horror can be poetry ;) x

[Distant horizons]

Wonderfully captured. The dark within us all sometimes blocks the light, it doesn't mean that it will not return though. Powerfully written, with a wonderful final line.

Thank you Lorry, yes we all have dark and darker within us, some dare to be open about it, others pretend they are only angels :) thanks a lot

[Distant horizons]

You're very welcome

[Lost in Wonderland]

Beautifully and poetically writen. You told this dark story with mystery and gothic elagance that was amazing. Very well done! My favorite of all your poems so far:)
God Bless
-Lost in Wonderland

Thank you very much x

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very chilling write... though I know this could be metaphorical for someone dead inside due to tragedy in their life as well... either way I enjoyed it.

Thanks Cowboy, yep it could be interpret at many levels. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome lovely lady :)

[Corset]

omg, I had signed off but had to come back and tell you this poem is spooky as all hell! That pic...yikes!
lol, nooo don't think I'll be sleeping to well tonight after seeing that, but your poem is righteous! Love your avatar pic btw :)

Thank you Corset... It was a nice dark experiment ;)

[ba_mcfarlane]

Interesting, sublime & unique.

Thank you my friend ;) it's the dark side of me...

[ba_mcfarlane]

Well then, thank you for sharing...every man loves a 'bad girl!'