~ Fragments

~ Fragments

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~ Fragments

 

 

 

I hear your  voice echo down the hills of my mind

Like the wind carried your sound to me in quadruplicate

The smell of fresh air and gentle natural wind

Make it so peaceful, so confidential with faith

I can almost smoke your breath within me

I can reach your core into my veins as you’re near

The way you run as a whirled ghost

Amazes me every new born day

Through my body, and bring me the lucky

Hormone in assimilation with my blood

You live right inside me, there’s no doubt

The unique kind of touch you give me

Even invisible, is a painting itself so rich

Oily musing moments, where we sat

Watched each other before going to bed

You spoiled my nose with your fingers all red

And we rolled and kissed naked on the spectrums of love

The canvas of dreams, full colored to leave our markings

Of our unique moment in time, when all was

Nude and painted our skins, in the moment

We danced in minds, made love in nights…

On that blank sheet full of lovely light

Where you kissed my soul, and blew me away

With the love you have in you,

To let me bloom and forever stay…

I shall never forget those memories

As all relives in the new painted ones

We shared and share as man and wife  “in-spe”

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


Author's Note

Thank you xx


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Dank je mijn alles mijn kleintje, mijn schat, voor je woorden, voor je visie voor je mooie gedichten aan mij, even snel lezen voor ik naar mijn werk ga, ik start de dag met zoveel warmte en je ziel kruist mijn gedachten, je bent geweldig, en ik hou van jou! Weet het, ook met je gezondheid we vechten altijd samen, je staat er niet alleen voor!

Kusjes je mannetje,
Mijn vrouw voor altijd,
Wees sterk, je kunt het.
Ik hou van jou. XX

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12 Years Ago

Tears... I love you... so much! dank je wel mijn liefste ♥



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Mooi, what a beautiful tribute to your love. Great write as usual.

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12 Years Ago

Dankie Maan :)
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I can only agree to the reviews below. This is a very good and beautiful piece of writing,moves sth deeply rooted in me. Somehow I feel related to the words you're using,remind me of some of my works. Love :-)

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12 Years Ago

Thank you so much sweetness! so glad you enjoyed it xo
This is incredible poetry. Absolutely beautiful..xx

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12 Years Ago

Thank you sweetie, I'm off facebook for a while, so now only here, thank you for your beautiful word.. read more
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12 Years Ago

Ok. Your welcome. I've been on here more anyways. (:

12 Years Ago

Oh great, well me too :) thanks again x
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Magical in the healing colors of green, you are, this is fab, truly beautiful, I so dig this music, it adds to the ambiance and wonder in the words, sometimes I think you hide inside all of us :P

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12 Years Ago

Thank you very much dear, for your time reading me. :)
pretty

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12 Years Ago

Thank you :)
pretty

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12 Years Ago

Thank you :)
The spectum of love is depicted passionately...fully in love, and truly sensual! I felt the magnetic chemistry of oil painting within a Sultry moment of love making. You have painted a tantalizing vision! Nicely done Eli!

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12 Years Ago

Thank you so much sis! ♥
Dank je mijn alles mijn kleintje, mijn schat, voor je woorden, voor je visie voor je mooie gedichten aan mij, even snel lezen voor ik naar mijn werk ga, ik start de dag met zoveel warmte en je ziel kruist mijn gedachten, je bent geweldig, en ik hou van jou! Weet het, ook met je gezondheid we vechten altijd samen, je staat er niet alleen voor!

Kusjes je mannetje,
Mijn vrouw voor altijd,
Wees sterk, je kunt het.
Ik hou van jou. XX

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12 Years Ago

Tears... I love you... so much! dank je wel mijn liefste ♥
Hypnotically beautiful words Elisa. Your pens magic never diminishes :-)

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12 Years Ago

Thakies Schotland dear X
Distant horizons

12 Years Ago

You're most welcome sweetie :-)
x

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