~ Fragments

~ Just dare to merge colors...

~ Fragments

 

 

 

I hear your  voice echo down the hills of my mind

Like the wind carried your sound to me in quadruplicate

The smell of fresh air and gentle natural wind

Make it so peaceful, so confidential with faith

I can almost smoke your breath within me

I can reach your core into my veins as you’re near

The way you run as a whirled ghost

Amazes me every new born day

Through my body, and bring me the lucky

Hormone in assimilation with my blood

You live right inside me, there’s no doubt

The unique kind of touch you give me

Even invisible, is a painting itself so rich

Oily musing moments, where we sat

Watched each other before going to bed

You spoiled my nose with your fingers all red

And we rolled and kissed naked on the spectrums of love

The canvas of dreams, full colored to leave our markings

Of our unique moment in time, when all was

Nude and painted our skins, in the moment

We danced in minds, made love in nights…

On that blank sheet full of lovely light

Where you kissed my soul, and blew me away

With the love you have in you,

To let me bloom and forever stay…

I shall never forget those memories

As all relives in the new painted ones

We shared and share as man and wife  “in-spe”

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

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Dank je mijn alles mijn kleintje, mijn schat, voor je woorden, voor je visie voor je mooie gedichten aan mij, even snel lezen voor ik naar mijn werk ga, ik start de dag met zoveel warmte en je ziel kruist mijn gedachten, je bent geweldig, en ik hou van jou! Weet het, ook met je gezondheid we vechten altijd samen, je staat er niet alleen voor!

Kusjes je mannetje,
Mijn vrouw voor altijd,
Wees sterk, je kunt het.
Ik hou van jou. XX

Tears... I love you... so much! dank je wel mijn liefste ♥

[Λsylum Ƣo&#..]

U bent van harte welkom, en dankzij mijn 'Nederlandse' woordenschat!

Nou je bent een van de weinigen die het aandurft ;)

[Λsylum Ƣoətry]

durven, durven . . .

Jazeker, ik aanbid diegenen die durven, hoe weet je dat? geheime volger :P

[Λsylum Ƣoətry]

omdat, zoals een dichter, ik durf anders te zijn. . . en ik hou van je werk.

Goede en sterke karakter eigenschap, ik kan niets meer zeggen dan, proost! Ik hou ook van jouw werk!~

[Λsylum Ƣoətry]

Dank je wel! je bent zo attent . . . !

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Sweet and romantic, let me dream about world of love! I liked so much your flowing like a river style, the color, the music! All is full with harmony!

Thank you lovely :-) made me smile! xx

[Λsylum Ƣo&#..]

Elisa~ u speciaal welkom. en, goede middag aan u!

Dank je wel, je spreekt goed Nederlands, complimenten!

[Λsylum Ƣo&#..]

Elisa~ the title caught my poetic eye, that and the image - plus one gorgeous penning. This flows so eloquently thanks to your marvelous talent for use of the written word!

Thank you. :)

[ewest1220]

You know it's crazy I actually feel physically refreshed after reading this. All the emotion tied very subtly in a context of passion. (The music was very well thought out as well) I'm thrilled to have the opportunity to read this. Thank you.

Thank you very much for your kind words, Elisa

[emmajoy]

Your poetry amazes me because you use English words with more subtlety and delicacy than so many of the UK population! Plus, somehow you reach into emotions and then, turn back their corners to let your readers have a brief share of something so precious and unique that we leave smiling, moved. Thank you Elisa...

' You live right inside me, there’s no doubt ~ The unique kind of touch you give me ~ Even invisible, is a painting .. ..'

Thank you so much Emma so so much.... xo

[emmajoy]

love the music too .. must sleep now .. smiles ..

Thanks, when I feel better, even when it takes a long road, I will have more energy to read/review more of your precious words too, sleep well... smiling back

[emmajoy]

Just get better, love, no worry about reviews, truly ..

[Cassie Fraga]

ooohh Passion... sweet passion... I LOVE YOUR WORK ELI!!! this blazed through me like a breath of fresh air... so sweet and soft with romance, and as always your descriptive phrases are on point... can feel and see each line crystal clear!!!
**tips my lyrical wand to you** LOVE TO YOU DEAR SISTAH!!

♥ Thank you my sweet sis love you x

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh my that was very romantic with a nice touch of sensuality... I breathe a sigh of delight from your words.

Thank you so much Dale :)

[Pax]

beautiful words comes with a beautiful images. I love it, absolutely stunning.

Thank you W. :) so glad you enjoyed and love it.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Beautiful tribute to your love and affection. Good wordings and nice picture.With regards.

Thank you very much dear sir!